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Mountains Glow
Vivid red flesh
Heat was off
Yet she was still hot
His light shined upon her
All around her mountains
Rise and fall
In their glow of love
Heat was off
Yet she was still hot
His light shined upon her
All around her mountains
Rise and fall
In their glow of love
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Re: Mountains Glow
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 3:12pm
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2nd Aug 2014 3:58pm
No I haven't Jack. .lol...
The passionate love they've made turned her red. ;)
Just imagine. ..now that's hot. Thank you :)
The passionate love they've made turned her red. ;)
Just imagine. ..now that's hot. Thank you :)
Re: Mountains Glow
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 4:16pm
I do love watching a woman's mountains rise and fall, after I've gotten her skin to glow... nice, vivid imagery as usual.
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3rd Aug 2014 9:23am
I have admired those mountains for quite some time :) The view from the top must be amazing. Thank you for the dream :)
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