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found this in my inbox
toil-with-words...
i was gonna say, i have been calling you beautiul, but then i thought you are all made up, like a tart with no heart, all dresed up with noyone to blow, and if people were to see the real you, like your profile pic now, you would be a total dog !!
but you pic says it all, gutter rat or what, !!!
consider yourself bitten !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My reply...
Hehehehe....You're going to have to do better than that little boy
toil-with-words...
it's amazing what a bit of cement will do slapped onto a cunts face, almost makes you look human, almost !!
talk about mutton dressed as lamb, you must fucking love it, getting all tarted up for your dup profile pic, writing all your perverted shit, all the guys comming on to you, fuck me, and i thought i was sad,
but its nice to see the ugly middle aged tarts like you having a sence of humor, is this a little better !!!
My reply...
I still can't hear you...try using the big boy voice.
You know, the world needs ditch diggers! I think
you will have better luck with that.
Oh, thanks for using my favorite word
And you thought right, you are sad. I feel so bad for you.
toil-with-words...
keep telling yourself your worth something
and you might just start to get high on your own supply, of bullshit,
oh and dont toot your horn too loud hunny, you anint that special !!
your legs must get tired working that st corner, but hey
girl has to make a living , even the sad old ones like you,!! !!
sat hi to the other tarts on here for me,
My reply...
Comic relief....that's about the only thing you're
good for...and that's not saying much because
You're not that funny.
Did your parents abuse you? Was your father a
woman beating drunkard? Maybe your mommy
was a crack whore and let the dirty old men
touch you in your little boy parts to get her fix.
It's hilarious, you're the only one coming (yes,
that's the correct way to spell it) on to me.
You think I got dressed up for dup? LMFAO
You must be what, fifteen? When your balls
drop...shout it to the world...prove everyone
in your circle wrong...become someone...
and stop being so bitter and angry...you'll
never get laid that way my little tart!
i was gonna say, i have been calling you beautiul, but then i thought you are all made up, like a tart with no heart, all dresed up with noyone to blow, and if people were to see the real you, like your profile pic now, you would be a total dog !!
but you pic says it all, gutter rat or what, !!!
consider yourself bitten !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My reply...
Hehehehe....You're going to have to do better than that little boy
toil-with-words...
it's amazing what a bit of cement will do slapped onto a cunts face, almost makes you look human, almost !!
talk about mutton dressed as lamb, you must fucking love it, getting all tarted up for your dup profile pic, writing all your perverted shit, all the guys comming on to you, fuck me, and i thought i was sad,
but its nice to see the ugly middle aged tarts like you having a sence of humor, is this a little better !!!
My reply...
I still can't hear you...try using the big boy voice.
You know, the world needs ditch diggers! I think
you will have better luck with that.
Oh, thanks for using my favorite word
And you thought right, you are sad. I feel so bad for you.
toil-with-words...
keep telling yourself your worth something
and you might just start to get high on your own supply, of bullshit,
oh and dont toot your horn too loud hunny, you anint that special !!
your legs must get tired working that st corner, but hey
girl has to make a living , even the sad old ones like you,!! !!
sat hi to the other tarts on here for me,
My reply...
Comic relief....that's about the only thing you're
good for...and that's not saying much because
You're not that funny.
Did your parents abuse you? Was your father a
woman beating drunkard? Maybe your mommy
was a crack whore and let the dirty old men
touch you in your little boy parts to get her fix.
It's hilarious, you're the only one coming (yes,
that's the correct way to spell it) on to me.
You think I got dressed up for dup? LMFAO
You must be what, fifteen? When your balls
drop...shout it to the world...prove everyone
in your circle wrong...become someone...
and stop being so bitter and angry...you'll
never get laid that way my little tart!
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Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 3:55pm
Tommie thats some deep shit it hurts in a few places.
I see someone
Yelling for some hard domination
Your sexy babe I can not pretend to understand what is happening.
Girl if your ever this way let me know I would love to play with you.
Its your soul girl dont let nothing break you
Fuck this thing hard and with your words knock the shit down
Devour destroy bite and chew passion is not a childs game
Show your deep side now in your words use your beautiful body and fuck this person to no end in the ending
Girl I feel a fire I would love to hit this one
I been inspired please understand the explosion of my next one and luv it will be written for you.
I see someone
Yelling for some hard domination
Your sexy babe I can not pretend to understand what is happening.
Girl if your ever this way let me know I would love to play with you.
Its your soul girl dont let nothing break you
Fuck this thing hard and with your words knock the shit down
Devour destroy bite and chew passion is not a childs game
Show your deep side now in your words use your beautiful body and fuck this person to no end in the ending
Girl I feel a fire I would love to hit this one
I been inspired please understand the explosion of my next one and luv it will be written for you.
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You're a firecracker seascape!
I love your passion and rawness!
Thank you dear for your fabulous comment! :-)
I can't wait to read your next poem.
I love your passion and rawness!
Thank you dear for your fabulous comment! :-)
I can't wait to read your next poem.
Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 4:25pm
Can't believe somebody will do this kind of verbal abuse to you...if this was really in your inbox I advise you to contact the Webmiss immediately.
I have noticed some typos in the first stanza/opening lines, but I'm guessing you just "copy and paste" it from the original message.
@EngrVV
I have noticed some typos in the first stanza/opening lines, but I'm guessing you just "copy and paste" it from the original message.
@EngrVV
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1st Aug 2014 4:32pm
You guessed right. I did just that, copy and paste.
Exactly how you read it is exactly how it came to me
in my inbox D_Poetic Engineer.
Exactly how you read it is exactly how it came to me
in my inbox D_Poetic Engineer.
Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 4:47pm
Right fucking on Tommie !!!
You are one of the most genuine people I have ever met. Beautiful, inside and out !!!
This "turd for words" is a pathetic excuse for manhood. You punched him in the gut and left him whimpering.
PS
You are one of the most genuine people I have ever met. Beautiful, inside and out !!!
This "turd for words" is a pathetic excuse for manhood. You punched him in the gut and left him whimpering.
PS
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 4:55pm
Ah dear sweet Poet...you've been very kind.
I appreciate and value everything you say.
I feel the same about you! ;)
And I thank you for your advice. :)
I appreciate and value everything you say.
I feel the same about you! ;)
And I thank you for your advice. :)
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1st Aug 2014 5:31pm
Tommie Lynn, luv :-* ~
As you already know, and I am quite, quite grateful for, your self-worth is impervious to all but your own definitions. :-* Nonetheless, it must be said (and I'm saying it here) that you are quite ethereally lovely and sexily smutty, as well, whichever way you would have it, as it should be, luv. ;-)
To address this rather severely, psychologically damaged, pustule excreted from some cesspool: one does wonder precisely what possessed him to believe it would be, ever, remotely acceptable for him to pass any sort of judgment upon or, for that matter, force his damaged worldview upon your awareness whatsoever. Hmmm... I am incensed. Highly. I am in danger of engaging in quite a diatribe. On that note, I shall retire.
Should you have need of me, luv, I am here. :-*
As you have correctly ascertained: this toil-with-words is an insignificance who will find himself most discomfitted by his actions, I daresay...
As you already know, and I am quite, quite grateful for, your self-worth is impervious to all but your own definitions. :-* Nonetheless, it must be said (and I'm saying it here) that you are quite ethereally lovely and sexily smutty, as well, whichever way you would have it, as it should be, luv. ;-)
To address this rather severely, psychologically damaged, pustule excreted from some cesspool: one does wonder precisely what possessed him to believe it would be, ever, remotely acceptable for him to pass any sort of judgment upon or, for that matter, force his damaged worldview upon your awareness whatsoever. Hmmm... I am incensed. Highly. I am in danger of engaging in quite a diatribe. On that note, I shall retire.
Should you have need of me, luv, I am here. :-*
As you have correctly ascertained: this toil-with-words is an insignificance who will find himself most discomfitted by his actions, I daresay...
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1st Aug 2014 6:05pm
Savaja...I can't express enough gratitude to you.
I have no words. I am grateful to you and everyone
else that has stuck with me. Everything you and everyone
else has said has touched me very deeply.
I thank you SO VERY MUCH. ;)
I have no words. I am grateful to you and everyone
else that has stuck with me. Everything you and everyone
else has said has touched me very deeply.
I thank you SO VERY MUCH. ;)
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 6:39pm
Crazy... you've been nothing but warm and welcoming to this new kid on the block. Love reading as you played with him, a cat with a mouse, in your messages... Well done.
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1st Aug 2014 6:54pm
I hate rodents.
I enjoy new poets...you bring new words that I like.
I try to be as welcoming as I can. Thank you WM for
your kindness. :)
I enjoy new poets...you bring new words that I like.
I try to be as welcoming as I can. Thank you WM for
your kindness. :)
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 6:56pm
You are an excellent ambassador for the site, then :)
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Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 7:55pm
you get a lot of support here, Tommie. we admire you for your toughness...
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1st Aug 2014 10:19pm
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You have my support Tommie. But please report it. Maybe something can be done about this. This is some stalker bullshit!!
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1st Aug 2014 10:21pm
Thank you xmar82. I am very grateful to all of the people
on here that stand by me. I appreciate you all. :)
on here that stand by me. I appreciate you all. :)
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1st Aug 2014 8:09pm
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1st Aug 2014 10:22pm
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1st Aug 2014 8:42pm
I'd say cut off his balls and feed 'em to the dogs but he clearly has none. Just as well I get sick on rancid meat.
As mentioned, report him to the mods; and do what you do best here my dear: WRITE!
LSP
As mentioned, report him to the mods; and do what you do best here my dear: WRITE!
LSP
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 10:25pm
Lmao LSP...I thank you so much.
I've blocked him.
Hopefully he keeps his cock-holster shut!
I've blocked him.
Hopefully he keeps his cock-holster shut!
Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 9:04pm
This piece just proves how oblivious I am. I thought this was a nice little site, where almost everyone got together, or at least pretended to.
And damn, girl! You told that "tart" off. Respect.
Maybe you should report or block them. Or if you're having fun, just toy with them a little longer. I don't know. Do what you want. It's a free-ish world.
And damn, girl! You told that "tart" off. Respect.
Maybe you should report or block them. Or if you're having fun, just toy with them a little longer. I don't know. Do what you want. It's a free-ish world.
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1st Aug 2014 10:27pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 9:17pm
Don't listen to that asshole he spelled his own name wrong I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be "spoils the words" nice work calling his dumbass out!
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1st Aug 2014 10:28pm
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1st Aug 2014 9:21pm
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1st Aug 2014 10:29pm
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You must resemble someone that laughed at the angry-inch he's obviously packing Tommie... Or he cant get anyone to look, one or the other ><
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1st Aug 2014 10:30pm
yeah....sometimes we get an infestation of weak-minded...
1st Aug 2014 10:14pm
...woman hating, angry, gutless, mommy-issues boy-men come swinging through demanding attention...trouble is, they are talentless walled-up sludge, so they quickly turn to anger when they get left out in the cold...and sometimes they just hate women, because they resent the power of women when they deny pussy to losers...
reckon you might have one of them bowl-stains troublin' you right now tl...
relax..all turds wash away
reckon you might have one of them bowl-stains troublin' you right now tl...
relax..all turds wash away
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1st Aug 2014 10:33pm
This is exactly how I thought of him hemi.
The boy has issues! Fuck him...I'm still smiling.
Thanks for your words. :)
The boy has issues! Fuck him...I'm still smiling.
Thanks for your words. :)
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 10:24pm
Yes, I would suggest you have a word with the DUP mistress on this abuse. There may not be a lot of point in fighting back because the perpetrator might enjoy the attention.
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1st Aug 2014 10:34pm
Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 11:53pm
Though I feel forgotten, I've always had a serious n deep affection for u lady... Amen for exposing the jackass
for bring exactly that...an ass! lol
for bring exactly that...an ass! lol
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 11:56pm
Sorry you feel that way Poetikmind. Never my intention.
I do appreciate your words and support. Thank you. :)
I do appreciate your words and support. Thank you. :)
Re: found this in my inbox
1st Aug 2014 11:59pm
There's no one who's ever accomplished anything of distinction, that hasn't been the target of a poison pen. Tommie, wear this thoughtless slander, as a badge of honor. And then, carry-on.
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
2nd Aug 2014 00:03am
Great comment snugglebuck. That's exactly what I'm doing.
Thank you for your support. :)
Thank you for your support. :)
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2nd Aug 2014 00:40am
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2nd Aug 2014 1:05am
I'd say make love and not war but I'd start plotting my revenge now.
Stay cool Tommie Lynn (nice name btw)
Stay cool Tommie Lynn (nice name btw)
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2nd Aug 2014 1:27am
I said what I needed to...I think he got the message. And that is he's a fleabag punk. I truly appreciate your words LizB.
Thank you and thank you for liking my name. :)
Thank you and thank you for liking my name. :)
Re: found this in my inbox
2nd Aug 2014 1:07am
As a friend of yours through Jack-Tex.. You have my support against this cancerous little fucker.
Cut him off like the confused, emotionally insecure, inferior gangrenous limb he truly is, nobody needs listen to his poisonous dribble.
Cut him off like the confused, emotionally insecure, inferior gangrenous limb he truly is, nobody needs listen to his poisonous dribble.
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2nd Aug 2014 1:31am
Thanks so much for your support Euan. It's nice to know
people have my back! :)
people have my back! :)
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Well tommielynn, it’s obvious that you inadvertently crushed some pock marked, pasty little dweeb’s fantasy. Why else would it target you like it did? It obviously hates women. I suppose it’s mommy issues would make any surviving, aborted fetus angry! It sees all women like the crack smoking whore who left it all alone floating in the bus terminal’s toilet(she didn't even have the decency to flush). Though, with creatures like this one, they are all mouth and little else. You just know this decrepit thing doesn’t ever leave the closet that it lives in. But I think you handled it really well. You have my utmost respect.
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2nd Aug 2014 1:13pm
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 4:37am
Tommie Lynn,
Damn stupid trolls! There ought to be an open season on them for sure! Hey wait, we don't need no stinking season, it's always open season on trolls!!! LOL !!! Fun to shot but the meat is not even good for crab bait! Loved your come backs! We are here at your back, just feel around and you'll find us ready!
tornado
Damn stupid trolls! There ought to be an open season on them for sure! Hey wait, we don't need no stinking season, it's always open season on trolls!!! LOL !!! Fun to shot but the meat is not even good for crab bait! Loved your come backs! We are here at your back, just feel around and you'll find us ready!
tornado
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
2nd Aug 2014 1:15pm
Everyone has been SO great!
I'm blown away by the support all have given.
Thank you tornado :)
I'm blown away by the support all have given.
Thank you tornado :)
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Well sheesh. Apparently "middle aged" women aren't allowed to be sexy and attractive. He probably jacks off to airbrushed celebrities like mariah carey and beyonce wishing he could have a piece of that. But you are a gorgeous lady. Pay him no mind just do you!
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2nd Aug 2014 1:16pm
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2nd Aug 2014 6:05am
Tommie, you're keeping your head held high...that's the only way to treat a bully. Here's some good quotes:
“Some people won't be happy until they've pushed you to the ground. What you have to do is have the courage to stand your ground and not give them the time of day. Hold on to your power and never give it away.”
― Donna Schoenrock
“People who love themselves, don’t hurt other people. The more we hate ourselves, the more we want others to suffer.”
― Dan Pearce
I pity any individual with such devastatingly low self-esteem that they have to spew hatred on others because hating themselves is no longer enough.
I love you my friend :)
“Some people won't be happy until they've pushed you to the ground. What you have to do is have the courage to stand your ground and not give them the time of day. Hold on to your power and never give it away.”
― Donna Schoenrock
“People who love themselves, don’t hurt other people. The more we hate ourselves, the more we want others to suffer.”
― Dan Pearce
I pity any individual with such devastatingly low self-esteem that they have to spew hatred on others because hating themselves is no longer enough.
I love you my friend :)
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2nd Aug 2014 1:17pm
You've been great GW! Always giving such wonderful advice. Thank you dear friend. :)
Re: found this in my inbox
2nd Aug 2014 7:34am
Am pleased you've blocked him Tommie Lyn...
He's still on site...was a formal complaint made?
He's not unknown to me....
He's been banned a number of times & comes back under another alias...
He feeds off your engagement with his behaviour...
Always best not to but hard to do when his diatribe is aimed at you....
You sound a strong woman so I do hope you haven't taken on anything he's said....
He's still on site...was a formal complaint made?
He's not unknown to me....
He's been banned a number of times & comes back under another alias...
He feeds off your engagement with his behaviour...
Always best not to but hard to do when his diatribe is aimed at you....
You sound a strong woman so I do hope you haven't taken on anything he's said....
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2nd Aug 2014 1:21pm
I'm sarcastically hilarious...nothing he said
to me offended me. He's a fleabag! Lol
Thank you kateA I appreciate your words :)
to me offended me. He's a fleabag! Lol
Thank you kateA I appreciate your words :)
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That Punk muthafuckin,, gutter bitch made ass hole is a straight up COWARD!!! Picking on women with his thumb in his ass spanking his dick watchin' Looney tunes. that shit's not at all cool!!!
Don't trip on that buster he ain't nothin'.. If you look closely he can't spell ain't... Loser!!
Sir Lancelott
Don't trip on that buster he ain't nothin'.. If you look closely he can't spell ain't... Loser!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: found this in my inbox
2nd Aug 2014 1:23pm
I did notice his spelling. Poor thing!
You're right, he is a coward.
Thank you much Lance :)
You're right, he is a coward.
Thank you much Lance :)
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 10:36am
As they say, actions speaks louder than words, the louder one speaks, the less they listen.
However, surely people listen to you as you have a truckload of support here....
Shine on, queen of hearts!
However, surely people listen to you as you have a truckload of support here....
Shine on, queen of hearts!
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2nd Aug 2014 1:24pm
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2nd Aug 2014 12:36pm
There's no place on DU for these gutless prosaic creeps - I agree with KateA he should be banned immediately
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4th Aug 2014 10:39pm
How disgusting, Tommie Lynn. Some sick people here on DU. Keep your chin up and keep writing. I'm glad that so many people support you!
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5th Aug 2014 00:47am