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toil-with-words...
i was gonna say, i have been calling you beautiul, but then i thought you are all made up, like a tart with no heart, all dresed up with noyone to blow, and if people were to see the real you, like your profile pic now, you would be a total dog !! 

but you pic says it all, gutter rat or  what, !!! 

consider yourself bitten !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 


My reply...
Hehehehe....You're going to have to do better than that little boy


toil-with-words...
it's amazing what a bit of cement will do slapped onto a cunts face, almost makes you look human, almost !! 

talk about mutton dressed as lamb, you must fucking love it, getting all tarted up for your dup profile pic, writing all your perverted shit, all the guys comming on to you, fuck me, and i thought i was sad, 

but its nice to see the ugly middle aged tarts like you having a sence of humor, is this a little better !!! 



My reply...
I still can't hear you...try using the big boy voice. 
You know, the world needs ditch diggers! I think 
you will have better luck with that. 
Oh, thanks for using my favorite word  

And you thought right, you are sad. I feel so bad for you. 

toil-with-words...
keep telling yourself your worth something 
and you might just start to get high on your own supply, of bullshit, 

oh and dont toot your horn too loud hunny, you anint that special !! 

your legs must get tired working that st corner, but hey 

girl has to make a living , even the sad old ones like you,!! !! 


sat hi to the other tarts on here for me,  





My reply...
Comic relief....that's about the only thing you're 
good for...and that's not saying much because 
You're not that funny. 

Did your parents abuse you? Was your father a 
woman beating drunkard? Maybe your mommy 
was a crack whore and let the dirty old men 
touch you in your little boy parts to get her fix. 

It's hilarious, you're the only one coming (yes, 
that's the correct way to spell it) on to me. 
You think I got dressed up for dup? LMFAO 
You must be what, fifteen? When your balls 
drop...shout it to the world...prove everyone 
in your circle wrong...become someone... 
and stop being so bitter and angry...you'll 
never get laid that way my little tart! 
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