Scent of Inferno

This poem has just enough demented words to guide the reader's mind, but yet it is a skeleton for an entire story, albeit a short one. This poem makes the reader think about how he/she wants to envision the story, thereby forcing them to use as much imagination as the author. That's not always an easy task, but you did well.

Thank you... I was in a whole different world writing this. Went back to my young teen years and took a few pages from how I used to write

This is dark and sinister. It speaks of suicide and possession. Good write Esoteric.

Glad you enjoyed and understood my very obvious tone