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Tell me
Tell me
Do you feel
Safe at nite
With your
Doors locked
Tell me what
You are dreaming
About
Nothing
Makes someone
Take a step back
Like racking
One into the
Chamber
Do u think you
Will wake before
I can cut your
Baby to off
I have always felt
Partial to the nite
Time
Tell me can you feel
My hot breath
On your neck
I am about to grab
Your throat
Sweet dreams
I love the sound
Of screams
Do you feel
Safe at nite
With your
Doors locked
Tell me what
You are dreaming
About
Nothing
Makes someone
Take a step back
Like racking
One into the
Chamber
Do u think you
Will wake before
I can cut your
Baby to off
I have always felt
Partial to the nite
Time
Tell me can you feel
My hot breath
On your neck
I am about to grab
Your throat
Sweet dreams
I love the sound
Of screams
Published 31st Jul 2014
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31st Jul 2014 10:40am
Very nice write. The end was really good, and had a very good build up.
31st Jul 2014 3:27pm
30th May 2015 00:13am
Rampant n vivid. Lots of good, aggressive phrases. A bit loopy but seems intended. Good read, keep grindin
