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-55. Pinks Dye Off Silver(complete version)
Your holding the blood inside
Inside soaking in ravaging pain
So use analogies
Parables to shine through the darkness
GIVE YOUR LIFE MEANING
(On top of the silver lining)
Your holding the blood inside
Inside soaking in ravaging pain
I've been following you
(Stalking your beautiful pink hair)
(On top of the silver lining)
So use analogies
Parables to shine through the darkness
GIVE YOUR LIFE MEANING
(On top of the silver lining)
WHY HIDE AWAY YOUR DEMONS
LET THEM BE FREE
FEAR THE REAPERS INSTEAD
USE YOUR ANALOGIES
NOT YOUR APOLOGIES
Your holding the blood inside
Inside soaking in ravaging pain
(Please rest your tired on soul my back)
Rest your tired soulx4
Published 29th Jul 2014
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18th Sep 2014 5:31pm
Quite distant n coded... very little conscious movement. Only the repetitiveness gave it flow n even that held very little sentiment. Keep grindin
14th Dec 2014 9:37am
I don't know what to say to that bro, but I'll fix it.
Actually a lot of the songs I wrote need fixing HAHAHAHA.
Thanks for the comment though and being honest and to be honest with you, a lot of my songs are unstructured and have no flow at all, that's just my style.
Actually a lot of the songs I wrote need fixing HAHAHAHA.
Thanks for the comment though and being honest and to be honest with you, a lot of my songs are unstructured and have no flow at all, that's just my style.
