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Jack Pot
Sitting at the casino last night
Watching people rub the screens
Was so surreal
As if their touch could evoke magic
Cause the reels to stop and hit the mega jack pot
Ding Ding you're the big winner tonight
I must admit i'm a bit superstitious
When I play
Smoking like a phene
Must pay your dues to the powers that be
If you want to be lucky
They love to sit in your chair and play along with you
Take a drink of coffee now
Smoke your weed
If you want to get paid
First you have to pay me
This what I hear
As I sit mesmerized by the spinning screens
Waiting for the big pay off
Can't sell my soul
For a big win
It already belongs to the master of the wheel
Needless to say
No bells rang for me
I went in with two hundred dollars
Played for six hours
Came out with the money
I came with
I beat the house
I played for free
I had a good time
End of story
Watching people rub the screens
Was so surreal
As if their touch could evoke magic
Cause the reels to stop and hit the mega jack pot
Ding Ding you're the big winner tonight
I must admit i'm a bit superstitious
When I play
Smoking like a phene
Must pay your dues to the powers that be
If you want to be lucky
They love to sit in your chair and play along with you
Take a drink of coffee now
Smoke your weed
If you want to get paid
First you have to pay me
This what I hear
As I sit mesmerized by the spinning screens
Waiting for the big pay off
Can't sell my soul
For a big win
It already belongs to the master of the wheel
Needless to say
No bells rang for me
I went in with two hundred dollars
Played for six hours
Came out with the money
I came with
I beat the house
I played for free
I had a good time
End of story
Published 6th Apr 2011
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6th Apr 2011 7:07pm
really enjoyed the read
very artful in describing an expirience we have both had
The last line kind of brought the great rhythm to an abrupt ending for me, perhaps you were looking to create that sensation
I am super stoked you did not lose your money! XD
very artful in describing an expirience we have both had
The last line kind of brought the great rhythm to an abrupt ending for me, perhaps you were looking to create that sensation
I am super stoked you did not lose your money! XD
6th Apr 2011 8:02pm
thank you DY..yeah I had a good time..I love to gamble too but I love to win big..so I sometimes push the limits I always max bet and hit the machine hard and fast so I'm super stoked too I played for free and came out with my money..thanks for the read and comment..peace Crim :)
Casinos so fun.. I'm more of a table girl but i can get the gist of it.. It's cute it's different it's a breathe of fresh air for me right now.. Very nice love your work crim :)
6th Apr 2011 8:08pm
Yeah you can win more at the tables if you're good..thank you for the beautiful comment..wishing you peace Crim :)
6th Apr 2011 8:50pm
Glide...It takes a really good poet to make ur eyes just glide with rhythme through their poem! I admire your work its so honest, so real. I wish I was as good as you!
6th Apr 2011 8:55pm
Miranda you are a very gifted poet..thank you for the beautiful comment..You're unique and see things in a lovely way..peace Crim :)
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