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Imagine That
Black tears roll down her face
she sits in silence and reflects
Mascara blinds her vision
quietly she wipes her tears
while noticing how heavy her heart feels.
She ponders her feelings
then turns to stone.
Copyright © 2006 J.Doucette
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Published 24th Jul 2014
| Edited 25th Jan 2025
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24th Jul 2014 7:40am
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2014 3:04pm
The harsh reality, how our emotions when pushed to the brink, trampled on... we shut out all existence... but the beauty is.... time... that clicheic psychobabble people express, has a way of freeing your mind. xoxo
24th Jul 2014 5:54pm
24th Jul 2014 5:19pm
Anonymous
25th Jul 2014 6:40am
Wow! I feel this way at times. Great write. Xo :)
25th Jul 2014 8:32pm
25th Jul 2014 6:23pm
Stone-cold closed off... Impacting on the mind n heart
Outstanding in its deft description my dear :)
Outstanding in its deft description my dear :)
25th Jul 2014 8:33pm
Yes I tend to get this way a lot when I feel deep inside that things are about to change hard Po!
always
Jackie xoxox
always
Jackie xoxox
25th Jul 2014 11:12pm
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26th Jul 2014 6:30am
26th Jul 2014 10:32pm
Sadness impact the heart in so many ways, your description and the picture meshed so well. An emotional write.
much love
G
much love
G
26th Jul 2014 10:41pm
Hello Glynis nice to see here :)
funny how things work out like that eh
Thanks for your thoughts.
I wrote this way before the picture was found.
Loves you TONS!
"D
Jackie
funny how things work out like that eh
Thanks for your thoughts.
I wrote this way before the picture was found.
Loves you TONS!
"D
Jackie
26th Jul 2014 11:37pm
Brilliant lil piece my pretty Broomie!!
Love the read and write sweets!!
Always in my prayers!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the read and write sweets!!
Always in my prayers!!
Sir Lancelott
27th Jul 2014 00:25am
(((((((((((((Lance))))))))))))))))
you always put a smile on my face honey!
thanks for the compliment too !
Love peace and hair grease!
Broomie ")
you always put a smile on my face honey!
thanks for the compliment too !
Love peace and hair grease!
Broomie ")
Anonymous
8th Aug 2014 2:52am
succinct and powerful, very much enjoyed
8th Aug 2014 3:37am
