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Annoying Crow
blinking in the morning sun
perched on a branch of pine
cawing from a rebel crow
warning a ruined soul
perched on a branch of pine
cawing from a rebel crow
warning a ruined soul
Published 21st Jul 2014
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21st Jul 2014 2:26pm
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21st Jul 2014 5:49pm
21st Jul 2014 5:19pm
Sounds like you're slumber was rudely interupted Tommie. I hate when that happens. Enjoyed it.
My quiet morning turned into me looking like a
lunatic on my porch yelling at a crow. Lol...
Thank you xmar82 :)
lunatic on my porch yelling at a crow. Lol...
Thank you xmar82 :)
21st Jul 2014 6:28pm
Reminds me of my "Intruders" poem. I kept getting interupted while I was writing, so I was inspired to write it.
21st Jul 2014 5:36pm
Reminds me of waking up by the sounds of roosters
back in the days while visiting my cousins in the farm...good read Tommie Lyn!
@EngrVV
back in the days while visiting my cousins in the farm...good read Tommie Lyn!
@EngrVV
21st Jul 2014 5:51pm
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22nd Jul 2014 00:01am
21st Jul 2014 9:05pm
None better animal to announce the ruination of a soul...the angel's antithesis. Wonderfully written, Tommie.
22nd Jul 2014 00:02am
22nd Jul 2014 2:58pm
