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Colors
I see black in the sky above
I see brown below my feet
I see yellow twinkling across the night
I see silver spheared above me
I see gray in the fluffy clouds
I see white in the air that I breathe out
I see the blue on your lips ...
and the red dripping down your face
I see brown below my feet
I see yellow twinkling across the night
I see silver spheared above me
I see gray in the fluffy clouds
I see white in the air that I breathe out
I see the blue on your lips ...
and the red dripping down your face
Published 21st Jul 2014
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- Edited 21st Jul 2014 2:55pm
21st Jul 2014 2:51pm
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22nd Jul 2014 2:48am
Disjointed. No connection between the colors. The final line does not at all relate to the descriptions prior. An attempt at depth, failed.
22nd Jul 2014 3:41am
