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Hey Diddle Diddle
Hey diddle diddle
It fit like a fiddle
My girl came up with the clap
I said hey my dear
It realy seems queer
But where the fuck you been at.
It fit like a fiddle
My girl came up with the clap
I said hey my dear
It realy seems queer
But where the fuck you been at.
Published 3rd Apr 2011
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5th Apr 2011 7:18am
...you do seem determined to throw down this kind of stuff, but they are generally pretty bad. Take the time to read them out loud to yourself...if you did you see that this one clearly needs work in the last line....seriously, if you really have to write these, they have to get better for anyone to care.
Read them out loud, or better yet, get someone to read them to you...it will make a huge difference...
Read them out loud, or better yet, get someone to read them to you...it will make a huge difference...
