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Breasts
I don't know when it started
but I know it'll never end
my admiration grows stronger
and I'll tell you this my friend
I've marvelled at the complexity
and even their very shape
Their smooth and supple feeling
makes me salivate.
The size and shape don't matter
I know I love them all
to have one flashed in passing
might make one hit a wall.
When I'm in their presents
my attension will gravitate
always in their direction
as if drawn to the bate.
I find them all adorable
from beach to fancy ball
I am a great admirer
and have been since I was small
They nurished my tiny body
without I'd not have grown
and now to feed my desire
and help to grow a bone.
but I know it'll never end
my admiration grows stronger
and I'll tell you this my friend
I've marvelled at the complexity
and even their very shape
Their smooth and supple feeling
makes me salivate.
The size and shape don't matter
I know I love them all
to have one flashed in passing
might make one hit a wall.
When I'm in their presents
my attension will gravitate
always in their direction
as if drawn to the bate.
I find them all adorable
from beach to fancy ball
I am a great admirer
and have been since I was small
They nurished my tiny body
without I'd not have grown
and now to feed my desire
and help to grow a bone.
Published 19th Apr 2011
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19th Apr 2011 12:13pm
...I still don't get anything from your work, except a feeling of nursery rhymes with a hard-on. When are we going to hear about you, about your life, not this veneer stuff?
On a positive note, the rhyming here is a huge improvement on your earlier stuff...hopefully you have started to read them out loud to yourself, to make that easier...
...on the negative side, your spelling still needs a lot of work...spellcheck please.
On a positive note, the rhyming here is a huge improvement on your earlier stuff...hopefully you have started to read them out loud to yourself, to make that easier...
...on the negative side, your spelling still needs a lot of work...spellcheck please.
26th Apr 2011 6:07pm
