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Her Words
When I read
Her words,
I’m no longer
Numb.
A million
Fucking miles
Away, she still
Puts a smile
On my face.
She talks dirty
Better than
Any other
Girl I know,
All the while
Writing these
Love poems
That make me
Believe it could
Be true.
Mystery is a
Motherfucker
For a dreamer
Like me and
Her’s is the
Best I know.
She is like a
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen--
Fire through
Rose colored
Glasses.
She is
Pure beauty,
Broken, only
Perfectly.
Her words,
I’m no longer
Numb.
A million
Fucking miles
Away, she still
Puts a smile
On my face.
She talks dirty
Better than
Any other
Girl I know,
All the while
Writing these
Love poems
That make me
Believe it could
Be true.
Mystery is a
Motherfucker
For a dreamer
Like me and
Her’s is the
Best I know.
She is like a
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen--
Fire through
Rose colored
Glasses.
She is
Pure beauty,
Broken, only
Perfectly.
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Re: Her Words
11th Jul 2014 2:33am
So beautiful AH ....
It truly is....fantastic.....
Into my reading list it goes....
It truly is....fantastic.....
Into my reading list it goes....
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11th Jul 2014 2:35am
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11th Jul 2014 3:40am
Every girl wishes to illicit this in somebody. You are so talented and it shows so clearly. Young poet, you expand and grow with each write. I love witnessing your momentum and journey.
She is beauty,
pure beauty,
broken, only
perfectly
You write through a genuine lens. A life that inspires work is the purest form of art that I know. xo
She is beauty,
pure beauty,
broken, only
perfectly
You write through a genuine lens. A life that inspires work is the purest form of art that I know. xo
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20th Jul 2014 6:15am
Loved the personal level this one is on. And I agree with the rest that "broken, only perfectly" is just right to core...:)
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20th Jul 2014 6:27am
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2014 9:30am
"She is like a
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen"
are the lines I like best.. I think they're an "effectual impression"...
Star in the night
Seen through a
Smoke screen"
are the lines I like best.. I think they're an "effectual impression"...
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26th Jul 2014 5:30am
Thank you so much, your comments are much appreciated! Give me a sec and I'll check your stuff out. I'm excited to see what kind of stuff you got!
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17th Mar 2020 3:31pm
Im glad you enjoyed thank you for the time and attention. You are awesome.
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Re. Her Words
12th Apr 2020 8:08am
Not bad, not bad at all
In each line you can tell you loved this girl a lot.
Such a deep write and I enjoyed it a lot.
Keep up the good work
In each line you can tell you loved this girl a lot.
Such a deep write and I enjoyed it a lot.
Keep up the good work
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