deepundergroundpoetry.com
Nighttime in Eden
Adam is not here and Eve is gone
Stars extinguished, darkness won
Eternally locked now is heaven's gate,
and for elusive redemption it is too late.
The angels cry but we don't see them.
God has left and it's nighttime in Eden.
Stars extinguished, darkness won
Eternally locked now is heaven's gate,
and for elusive redemption it is too late.
The angels cry but we don't see them.
God has left and it's nighttime in Eden.
Published 10th Jul 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 632
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
10th Jul 2014 11:57am
I really like the atmosphere in this poem....
the anticipation of it.....
the anticipation of it.....
10th Jul 2014 1:23pm
10th Jul 2014 6:04pm
11th Jul 2014 1:12am
I like this one, it is simple but sophisticated. And the topic was expressed beautifully.
