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I Want You Right Now.....
(9:30 am.....sun filtering through vertical blind. Gulls calling. Lilting across the horizon aboard a southern breeze....bringing me back to life)
I want you right now............
...I care not the words
that are spoken,
simply absorb the emotion
in this powerful desire
I feel for you
and you alone
an awakening,
semi soft,
semi sweet,
semi chocolate...
...a dangling participle
swinging from west to east
naked and free
pleasing to the eye....
mind boggled
and twisted
into a pretzel logic,
always coming back to you
spurred by the harmonic echoes
of the sensual words
and music of your mind
poured like lotion
onto my hands
teasing and taunting me
unintentionally,
softly whispered...
"...yes, I want to fuck you right now"
sitting high upon her throne
soft and wet
bubbling
just below the surface
the stirring of her own
morning arousal,
she speaks
of hands touching intimate moments
of a warm, golden release
pouring free like
the juices of the vine
thoughts
blowing my mind about...
...like the lilting birds
hung in the bay winds
drifting on a gentle breeze,
baby please...
“...Let's do it again”
I need your body, right now
…..I care not how
the words
fuel this intimate need,
...just “feel the need”
My body wants your body,
all over my body,
right now
Published 5th Jul 2014
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5th Jul 2014 9:27pm
To express one's self fully and naturally is a brave achievement. But to change the wavelength of someone else's self-expression from your own-- is fusion. Thank you for the growth that comes with much reading of writes like this.
7th Jul 2014 5:46pm
5th Jul 2014 10:04pm
….the ‘want’ in this ink is so deeply felt, that a sigh escaped my lips, transformed into oxygen, giving your ‘need’ life; as I float within a hazed hallucination, from the yearning in your beautiful sensual words. ~Captivating, you are....
Xoxo
Xoxo
7th Jul 2014 5:55pm
Thank you Ms. Rain Your reply is equally as beautiful and elegant. A longing desire felt by a man for his woman is a most quintescintual part of an everlasting love. I'm so glad that my thoughts moved you : )
6th Jul 2014 3:10am
You are the master of such mesmerizing and enchanting luscious erotic love poems and when I read your poems, I am always brought to that place that I share with my special someone -- that place of total surrender to love and its expression of blissful lust -- thank you for writing such exquisite poetry!!! ♡♡♡
7th Jul 2014 5:59pm
7th Jul 2014 4:51am
love how this ink drizzled down the page with elegant expertise..vivid wordplay..Beautifully Done Mr M
fav part:
"thoughts
blowing my mind about...
...like the lilting birds
hung in the bay winds
drifting on a gentle breeze,
baby please..."
and this:
"an awakening,
semi soft,
semi sweet,
semi chocolate... " well that just took the cake
fav part:
"thoughts
blowing my mind about...
...like the lilting birds
hung in the bay winds
drifting on a gentle breeze,
baby please..."
and this:
"an awakening,
semi soft,
semi sweet,
semi chocolate... " well that just took the cake
7th Jul 2014 6:01pm
11th Jul 2014 7:46pm
I really love the playfulness of this write. The ending was solid and made me smile. :)
