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Shine - Trilogy of Senryu
Faded brittle rose
Pressed between the pages of
Long forgotten books
Books and roses I love
Remembrance of the fragrance
Of passion long gone
Gone to just refresh
The scent of desire and shine
On another love
Pressed between the pages of
Long forgotten books
Books and roses I love
Remembrance of the fragrance
Of passion long gone
Gone to just refresh
The scent of desire and shine
On another love
Published 2nd Jul 2014
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2014 10:58pm
Miss Chi,
I like the glimmer of happiness in moving on I got from your write. Cool!
tornado
I like the glimmer of happiness in moving on I got from your write. Cool!
tornado
Does happiness shine through? Than I'm all the more happy about your sweet comment and hope it's contagious and spreads, tornado. Thanks a lot!
2nd Jul 2014 11:15pm
there is a melancholy between
the musty pages of old books,
which I sadly love...
the musty pages of old books,
which I sadly love...
3rd Jul 2014 7:12am
It's such a comforting smell, isn't it? That's why I love libraries so much, too. Thanks for your understanding comment, Paul.
3rd Jul 2014 1:53am
3rd Jul 2014 7:15am
Just some tears and they're in bloom again ...
'Brittle roses' is a far better title than 'Shine'. Thanks for the idea and your lovely comment, Hash!
'Brittle roses' is a far better title than 'Shine'. Thanks for the idea and your lovely comment, Hash!
3rd Jul 2014 3:55am
3rd Jul 2014 7:37am
*blush* ... thank you so much, Poe, for your thrilling words! Happy to see you here! Hugs!
3rd Jul 2014 4:50am
letting go & moving on. but we always return to the old books.
sooner or later...
sooner or later...
3rd Jul 2014 7:38am
... where we'll find comfort of the treasured remnants of the past. Good to know you feel the same.
3rd Jul 2014 6:41am
3rd Jul 2014 7:39am
3rd Jul 2014 11:13am
That's far more than I hoped for. Glad you found it comforting :-). Soothes my heart, too.
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3rd Jul 2014 1:51pm
3rd Jul 2014 7:28pm
There is, JeJe. There will mostly be something beautiful left. Although, as we both know, not always. xo
3rd Jul 2014 3:44pm
3rd Jul 2014 7:30pm
Thank you kindly, WhispersCanIgnite. Glad you stopped by and left a nice comment.
3rd Jul 2014 4:59pm
Brings a sense of hope to dying love. Speaks of rebirth and beauty from the ashes of the past. You never disappoint. Loved it.
3rd Jul 2014 7:37pm
A sense of hope ... for everyone who has lost someone. I appreciate your thoughtful comments much, xmart82. Btw, I hate to disappoint :-).
3rd Jul 2014 11:10pm
Bright as a button Miss Chi. Always a fan of your work. You can't disappoint. Thank you. :)
7th Jul 2014 7:26pm
You are so sweet, Twitch :-). I love your kind and lovely comments. They (and you) brighten my days. You're welcome :-)
12th Jul 2014 5:11am
The intersection between memories of the past, and the vitality of the present give the reader much space to draw his/her own conclusions.
14th Jul 2014 9:12pm
If that's what the poem effects I'm absolutely happy :-) since it's exactly what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much, JAZZ!
