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The Greatest
The greatest thing ive ever done in life
Was to make you laugh
The greatest moment in my life
Was when we two crossed paths
The greatest thing ive ever heard
Was your voice speak my name
It came in through my ears, erased my fears,
and ceased my pain
The greatest thing you've said to me
Was we'll always be friends
My greatest fear is only that
i'll never see you again
God's greatest miracle would be
to have you here again with me
But you're not here and that makes me sad
Because youre the greatest friend ive ever had
Was to make you laugh
The greatest moment in my life
Was when we two crossed paths
The greatest thing ive ever heard
Was your voice speak my name
It came in through my ears, erased my fears,
and ceased my pain
The greatest thing you've said to me
Was we'll always be friends
My greatest fear is only that
i'll never see you again
God's greatest miracle would be
to have you here again with me
But you're not here and that makes me sad
Because youre the greatest friend ive ever had
Published 1st Apr 2011
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1st Apr 2011 8:40pm
1st Apr 2011 10:47pm
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3rd Apr 2011 6:02am
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2011 9:06pm
Lovely indeed!
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2011 7:12pm
That was beautiful
and so heartfelt,
I enjoyed the read.
words of pain can often be turned
into such beauty.
and so heartfelt,
I enjoyed the read.
words of pain can often be turned
into such beauty.
22nd Nov 2011 7:13pm
thank you so much for reading n commenting! ill be checking out some of yours
7th Dec 2011 2:18pm
I like it a lot, I think I would like it more if it was about a intimate relationship... But that's just a personal preference ! I like it a lot keep it up
20th Feb 2012 4:30am
29th Nov 2012 1:25am
The Greatest thing Ive ever done
was take one glance at your ink,
filling me with gratitude, by knowing Im in the midst of greatness when reading your work.
This was such a beautiful piece! I felt the love, the longing, the sadness and the appreciation of once having complete joy because of someone else. xoxo
was take one glance at your ink,
filling me with gratitude, by knowing Im in the midst of greatness when reading your work.
This was such a beautiful piece! I felt the love, the longing, the sadness and the appreciation of once having complete joy because of someone else. xoxo
