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Do You
Do you ...
See a lost temptress worth the saving
unshackling from the world while enslaving
Her heart scarred from deceptions breaking
but with a smile worth the effort in creating
Warming you in its brilliance, drawing you in
a kindred spirit that ignites a craving
for bodies and minds to be as one
Soaking in the fuels of desire and knowledge
to be lit ablaze with a demanding touch.
Do you wish to sate your wicked desires
deep within soft yielding flesh of barely contained fires
Soft whimpers drowning out the overworked mind's distractions
pleading for your release into dripping walls of satisfaction
As she, on her knees licks life's essence from your pulsing passions.
Do you want to kiss alabaster, tattooed in blue and purple hues
from fingertips and bindings that with harsh reverence bruise
Your dark desires gripping tightly in the light of day and caress in shadows of the night
Wanting desperately to feel the arching climax as your Fallen Angel takes flight
Do you...
See a lost temptress worth the saving
unshackling from the world while enslaving
Her heart scarred from deceptions breaking
but with a smile worth the effort in creating
Warming you in its brilliance, drawing you in
a kindred spirit that ignites a craving
for bodies and minds to be as one
Soaking in the fuels of desire and knowledge
to be lit ablaze with a demanding touch.
Do you wish to sate your wicked desires
deep within soft yielding flesh of barely contained fires
Soft whimpers drowning out the overworked mind's distractions
pleading for your release into dripping walls of satisfaction
As she, on her knees licks life's essence from your pulsing passions.
Do you want to kiss alabaster, tattooed in blue and purple hues
from fingertips and bindings that with harsh reverence bruise
Your dark desires gripping tightly in the light of day and caress in shadows of the night
Wanting desperately to feel the arching climax as your Fallen Angel takes flight
Do you...
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Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 8:11am
A worthy temptress, yes, sharing the desires of a kindred, spirited, Fallen Angel.
"... barely contained fires" Uh, I don't think so.
Remarkable write, dear lady. Pass the fan.
"... barely contained fires" Uh, I don't think so.
Remarkable write, dear lady. Pass the fan.
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 6:25pm
Thank you kindly Mr VP... :) your taking a moment to read and comment is always a pleasure for me :) Can I throw some Franklin's for your comment?? if sooo.. consider it done dear friend.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
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2nd Jul 2014 9:21am
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 6:28pm
:) thank you Jack-Tex.. your comment brings a blush to my cheeks :) to be mentioned in the same breath (line) as Emma Lazarus is an honor you have graciously bestowed...with sincere gratitude I thank you.. with much respect..domore
Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 1:21pm
This is your writing on desire overdrive
Impressive and powerful imagery
One of your best yet ...
xx
Impressive and powerful imagery
One of your best yet ...
xx
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 6:30pm
ohhh sweetest Sir.. your comment is too kind.. and it has firmly planted itself within my mind and heart..I am honored that this has found a home within your RL.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: Do You
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2014 3:07pm
Wowzers! This is a powerful write. You have not the heart or soul of a fallen Angel. You are a precious Devine Angel with luv and care for others. You were once the stranger that came to me and showed me friendship out of the darkness. Just had to let you know my thoughts. Oh.....I luv this sexy write. Almost forgot to praise you for this fantastic piece. LOL!! Luv and hugs. Xo :)
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 11:46pm
Lovely flower.. it is your beacon that guided me.. that showed me the path to friendship I value so very much!! Thank you for your wonderful comment.. I had ummmmmm delights upon my mind when writing this :) LOL hugs to you xoxo
Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 4:10pm
For all queens are worth saving
permission granted through bruised knees
trust the shadows as they walk
in the same darkness you weep
Very alluring write Sweet Domore, You ask Do you....Within the proper hands the answer is a command.......command of strong hands that takes you, pulling you in, into your wishes....for you are past words and need to feel his conviction, conviction he demands,demands that are deeper than words......where only souls can listen.
permission granted through bruised knees
trust the shadows as they walk
in the same darkness you weep
Very alluring write Sweet Domore, You ask Do you....Within the proper hands the answer is a command.......command of strong hands that takes you, pulling you in, into your wishes....for you are past words and need to feel his conviction, conviction he demands,demands that are deeper than words......where only souls can listen.
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 11:49pm
Thank you dearest Awakened.. your comments always leave me a bit breathless... mini glimpses into your world that leave me craving a larger taste :) with deepest respect to you.. eyes downcast..xoxo domore
Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 6:33pm
"Do you wish to sate your wicked desires
deep within soft yielding flesh of barely contained fires"<- those lines just gripped my attention! Very sexy write, domore! Xo
deep within soft yielding flesh of barely contained fires"<- those lines just gripped my attention! Very sexy write, domore! Xo
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 11:51pm
Thank you so very much RainC.... I am beyond thrilled that you stopped by for a little reading pleasure..taking the time to comment..:) you have made my day!! with much respect..xoxo domore
Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 8:07pm
very sharp & sensual craftwork in this. the wonderful wantoness of fallen angels...
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re: Re: Do You
2nd Jul 2014 11:55pm
Thank you Mr Feddeler.. I adore your comment.. thank you so much for stopping in for the visit.. I am near speechless... with utmost respect to you... domore
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3rd Jul 2014 6:17am
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3rd Jul 2014 7:04am
thank you chriswwriter.. with your Ahem... you have said a mouth full!! so glad you stopped in, and took a moment to comment. with respect..domore
Re: Do You
6th Jul 2014 4:24pm
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6th Jul 2014 5:33pm
thank you so much lilsouthernbelle... I am honored you stopped in for a read :) your comment soo generous :) with much respect to you..domore
Re: Do You
9th Jul 2014 8:00am
As she, on her knees licks life's essence from your pulsing passions....d poetic moments r like ds...
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re: Re: Do You
23rd Jul 2014 4:59pm
thank you taito-10... for stopping in and reading.. your kind comment most welcome :) with respect..domore
Re: Do You
25th Jul 2014 4:41am
Domore2014, luv :-* ~
This poem is quite magnificent! It is breathtaking in passion and this rather desperate love and dire tenderness taking place.
I am haunted by images of
As she, on her knees licks life's essence from your pulsing passions.
Do you want to kiss alabaster, tattooed in blue and purple hues
from fingertips and bindings that with harsh reverence bruise
What incredibly evocative images you conjure!
Small technical clean-ups you may be interested in are it's to its (pesky English with no possessive form for its :-p) body's to bodies, mind's to minds, and then minds to either mind's or minds' depending on whether you're speaking of solely his mind or both his and her mind - that's all.
You wield a wickedly wonderful word. Thank you!
This poem is quite magnificent! It is breathtaking in passion and this rather desperate love and dire tenderness taking place.
I am haunted by images of
As she, on her knees licks life's essence from your pulsing passions.
Do you want to kiss alabaster, tattooed in blue and purple hues
from fingertips and bindings that with harsh reverence bruise
What incredibly evocative images you conjure!
Small technical clean-ups you may be interested in are it's to its (pesky English with no possessive form for its :-p) body's to bodies, mind's to minds, and then minds to either mind's or minds' depending on whether you're speaking of solely his mind or both his and her mind - that's all.
You wield a wickedly wonderful word. Thank you!
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re: Re: Do You
25th Jul 2014 4:39pm
Thank you Miss Savaja... I sooo appreciate the read and lovely comments.. I would also like to thank you for the "clean up" suggestions.. grammer/spelling/punctuation being my arche nemisis.. you assist greatly :) Thank you again for stopping in.. happy am I that you enjoyed.. with much respect..domore