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Quantum Theatrics
All the world's a stage
All the people merely players
All the bodies merely costumes
I wrote the script
I wrought the stage
Immaculate improvisation
Flawless execution
For only from within ourselves
Form and shape premeire
All the people merely players
All the bodies merely costumes
I wrote the script
I wrought the stage
Immaculate improvisation
Flawless execution
For only from within ourselves
Form and shape premeire
Published 31st Mar 2011
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31st Mar 2011 6:29am
...ripping off the bard, which is cool, but you have to follow it up pretty solidly to do the man justice...this doesn't, because the last couple of lines don't read smoothly...can you maybe try to smooth 'em out? Maybe have someone read it out to you to see how it reads to others...
