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Knots
to your knees
my dirty little servant
take your place
to desires so fervent
blue and purple submission
kissing the ground I stand
my shadow casts upon you
blanketing the damned
come to me my pet
lay across my lap
allow me to remove your demons
with my hardened slap
let me unleash them
into my hands
unravels the knots within you
for me to command
use them around your wrists
behind your slender back
get you all twisted
bound with no slack
contort your pretty little frame
constrict your being
held tightly into my grip
leather of my caring
submit to my wrappings
a gift from me
from within these bindings
I will set you free
my dirty little servant
take your place
to desires so fervent
blue and purple submission
kissing the ground I stand
my shadow casts upon you
blanketing the damned
come to me my pet
lay across my lap
allow me to remove your demons
with my hardened slap
let me unleash them
into my hands
unravels the knots within you
for me to command
use them around your wrists
behind your slender back
get you all twisted
bound with no slack
contort your pretty little frame
constrict your being
held tightly into my grip
leather of my caring
submit to my wrappings
a gift from me
from within these bindings
I will set you free
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26th Jun 2014 4:28pm
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26th Jun 2014 4:43pm
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26th Jun 2014 9:15pm
Things have been a bit over whelming as of late, I myself am glad to find a bit of time to write again. It was my honor to have stimulated, making you smile. Thank you for reading
Re: Knots
27th Jun 2014 3:55am
Sensational... such a mix of feeling. I love the strength and command of your prose as well as the almost sympathetic release you offer from your instruction. Love this piece xx
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3rd Jul 2014 4:24pm
Thank yo Heart of Glass, It is always good to know that my work has stirred some sort of emotion, thus giving it some credibility. I always enjoy your comments
Re: Knots
27th Jun 2014 4:01am
That pen of yours is a fire starter, G! Smothering flames in black and white print. Xo
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
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re: Re: Knots
3rd Jul 2014 4:25pm
Lovely Rain, it is a treasure to see you tangles within the knots of my words. You are awesome
Re: Knots
27th Jun 2014 6:14am
Sexy!!
Painted a lustrous picture of BDSM to me!
The picture mirrors the poem beautifully, i got tangled in the knots of pleasure!
Painted a lustrous picture of BDSM to me!
The picture mirrors the poem beautifully, i got tangled in the knots of pleasure!
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3rd Jul 2014 4:29pm
BDSM, yes indeed....Thank you for sharing your thoughts Devine Honey. It is always such a pleasure to have captured....the audience.
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Enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this darkly sensous ink..an absolutely sexy write. The interlacing of "release" and "restraint" was perfectly crafted, entangling the reader into every word..
with deepest respect..domore
with deepest respect..domore
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re: Re: Knots
3rd Jul 2014 4:32pm
To be or Knot to be...that is the question. Thank you always for visiting and reading my work, It is I who is blessed to have you in my web.
Re: Knots
29th Jun 2014 10:04pm
sexy, knots... the title alone lends fervent thoughts. Your tongue wrapped around shibari is a delicacy to savor. Thank you for sharing such exquisite breaths with us. :P
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re: Re: Knots
3rd Jul 2014 4:38pm
May your buds always be enchanted to taste the mysteries of this world and to never leave you hungry.
Thank You Blue Angel, you comments delight me in many ways.
Thank You Blue Angel, you comments delight me in many ways.
Re: Knots
6th Jul 2014 11:04am
Wow your gentle caring coaxing tone that promises everything but the opposites, had me grinning..loved it..had me wondering if you kept candy in your pocket too?? curtsy bow...
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re: Re: Knots
8th Jul 2014 7:59pm
Feenix, Truly appreciate your comments and your time as you find yourself wrapped up into my write. No candy in my pocket, I keep them empty to fill them with wishes and desires ;)
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