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Ride
I open her up
feeling her
vibrate between
my thighs
I've been waiting
for this moment
for so long
She fills me with
raw power and
moves me like
nothing has ever
moved me before
and probably
never will again
feeling her
vibrate between
my thighs
I've been waiting
for this moment
for so long
She fills me with
raw power and
moves me like
nothing has ever
moved me before
and probably
never will again
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Re: Ride
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Re: Ride
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jun 2014 5:30pm
26th Jun 2014 5:29pm
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re: Re: Ride
26th Jun 2014 6:07pm
First I'd like to say thank you very much. I'm so happy you enjoyed this. Second. ..who the hell told you to go easy??? A prude I'm sure! Write what you want..what pleases you. People have opinions. .sure..but don't let that stop you from creating something you enjoy. Again, I thank you! ;)
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