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giving him freedom
he was that one thing I could hold onto
keeping him all to myself during chaos
he brought me peace within the prison
holding on to the cold steel bars with
white knuckles while his words grazed
my naked neck giving me what I needed
his beautiful tortured mind lived as he
touched my warm flesh and I felt him
sink into my heart giving him freedom
keeping him all to myself during chaos
he brought me peace within the prison
holding on to the cold steel bars with
white knuckles while his words grazed
my naked neck giving me what I needed
his beautiful tortured mind lived as he
touched my warm flesh and I felt him
sink into my heart giving him freedom
Published 22nd Jun 2014
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22nd Jun 2014 7:41pm
Free to experience the love you had for him in your heart, beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it very much.
22nd Jun 2014 8:23pm
23rd Jun 2014 2:03am
a lot of turmoil going on here, Tommie, made peaceful by mutual desire...
23rd Jun 2014 3:30am
Thank you John for reading and the spot on comment. Always a pleasure when you stop by. ;)
23rd Jun 2014 6:55am
Wonderful piece Tommie! The idea of words bringing to you peace is a beautiful, much needed release. As your words have so often done for me. Brava mia Poeta!
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23rd Jun 2014 1:39pm
A deeper, darker side of 'Freebird' bouncing around in my head now, miss. I think I'm missing the point, but I can't help it!
23rd Jun 2014 5:00pm
I can see that Hawkdude...now that song will be stuck in my head all day! ;)
26th Nov 2015 12:56pm
love it. i get stressed and forget that when i stop writing for awhile that it hurts him as much as it hurts having him and still being alone
