deepundergroundpoetry.com
The Demon
Heart as hard as stone
Voice as cold as ice
Soul as black as coal
The demon is taking over
Every nerve in my body
Is changing for the worse
I cannot stop it
The demon is in control
Everyone around me
Stays away for the better
I would drown it
But it can swim
The monster inside me
Has broken through
And now I crumble
As I watch everyone I love suffer
Voice as cold as ice
Soul as black as coal
The demon is taking over
Every nerve in my body
Is changing for the worse
I cannot stop it
The demon is in control
Everyone around me
Stays away for the better
I would drown it
But it can swim
The monster inside me
Has broken through
And now I crumble
As I watch everyone I love suffer
Published 21st Jun 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 702
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
21st Jun 2014 6:16am
7th Sep 2014 6:02am
"Heart as hard as stone
Voice as cold as ice
Soul as black as coal
The demon is taking over"
This is a chilling way to start out and it keeps me focused on the eeriness of the write and the way I do NOT like demons.. but this is a good poem .. good write.
Voice as cold as ice
Soul as black as coal
The demon is taking over"
This is a chilling way to start out and it keeps me focused on the eeriness of the write and the way I do NOT like demons.. but this is a good poem .. good write.
