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They Tried to Kill me
They tried to kill me.
Even tried to run me over.
Left me bleeding.
To die of hunger.
The one thing I now know and see.
Is that they tried to kill me.
Even tried to run me over.
Left me bleeding.
To die of hunger.
The one thing I now know and see.
Is that they tried to kill me.
Published 19th Jun 2014
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19th Jun 2014 2:55am
19th Jun 2014 7:49pm
Oh god. I hope this really didnt happen. If it did, Ill be killing a bitch. Good poem though!!!!
20th Jun 2014 00:15am
Have you tried reading some of the English romantic poets...I think adopting some of their rhyme and meter while incorporating your topic matter would be very productive. As it stands, you have a very straightforward poem, simple, and there is nothing wrong with that, but it does not make the reader think too much...
20th Jun 2014 3:19am
Rhiannon it really did happen and also to hardenedsteel thank you for the comment I really appreciate it also I think most of my poems are straightforward I know you know nothing about me but I am glad that you commented
20th Jun 2014 3:26am
23rd Jun 2014 10:12pm
Hey I feel you, I Know your pain my ex hit me with my car.And left me to die. Keep your head up.
