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The Emo
From start to finish,
I wonder why,
The cuts look good,
In this messed up lie,
The blood that trickles,
Down my arm,
People all stare,
At the boy who self-harms
"The Emo" they call me,
I turn to my name,
They act out slicing theit wrists,
I hang my head in shame,
I can't help my feelings,
Of being alone,
I hide myself for the day,
Just longing to go home,
I sprawl on my bed,
With my razor in hand,
And take myself away,
To a much better land
I stare in the mirror,
And watch myself cry,
And long for the day,
I finnaly die....
I wonder why,
The cuts look good,
In this messed up lie,
The blood that trickles,
Down my arm,
People all stare,
At the boy who self-harms
"The Emo" they call me,
I turn to my name,
They act out slicing theit wrists,
I hang my head in shame,
I can't help my feelings,
Of being alone,
I hide myself for the day,
Just longing to go home,
I sprawl on my bed,
With my razor in hand,
And take myself away,
To a much better land
I stare in the mirror,
And watch myself cry,
And long for the day,
I finnaly die....
Published 28th Mar 2011
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28th Mar 2011 8:05pm
31st Mar 2011 2:34pm
Thanks! You really think i'm good? i'm a beginner but like really depressed. And i don't wanna die but it's always on my mind.
2nd Apr 2011 5:04am
I can see that poetry is an outlet for you, or at least it seems that way. I enjoy reading your work.
8th Apr 2011 8:20pm
6th Apr 2011 4:39pm
really nice poem. can relate in a way. my difference is that people didn't know that about me. i hid behind the mask of being there to help other people and always happy, so they never saw the scars under my sleeves, or the pain in my eyes. don't kill yourself man. i've come close too many times. overdosing on medical ibprofen by taking 30 800 mg ibprofen, cutting wrists, arms, heating my knife till its burning hot and then cutting, starving. it's ok to be depressed, cause i won't be able to stop mine, but use these poems as an outlet man.
6th Apr 2011 4:40pm
i just published my first poem too man. its called blood stained. it's not great but i like it still. i like yours, it's simple yet complex and cuts deep to the core. keep up the writing man.
8th Apr 2011 8:21pm
8th Apr 2011 5:09pm
"Emo's" are some of the deepest and most caring people, in my opinion.
its not good to be suicidal, tut tut :P
TWLOHA.<3
its not good to be suicidal, tut tut :P
TWLOHA.<3
8th Apr 2011 8:23pm
us emos are deep and caring,thats why i remain single XD hahahaha suicide is hard so don't tut tut me!!!!! lolz
10th Apr 2011 2:21am
10th Apr 2011 2:25am
