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It starts as a heat from your burning loins
ends as a fiery longing as when our bodies join
erogenous and ethereal, her scent fills the room
once more, I can't move through shapes that loom
spiraling darkness in shifting red dusts
she descends to the pull of my sinful lust
kissing her neck, stroking her thighs
I longed for this thrilling, insatiable high
a seductive smile affixed with innocence
desecrated by my overpowering decadence
Suddenly, we're closer, with intentions clear
"I want to do terrible things to you, my dear"
I licked her lips as sweet as wine
she teased, "can your fingers move like mine?"
her touch so electric, so ardent around me
I pinned her on the spread forcibly
I penetrate two fingers deep inside
she crosses her legs in an attempt to hide
her hot...craving...flooding below
I descend for a taste I am yet to know
smoothly, I slid in my wanton tongue
I got too hot...had to come undone
the taste between her wet, tight flesh lingers
breathless was her devilish moan of pain & pleasure
begging, she pressed her clit against my face
to violate her harder in a thousand ways
roughly devouring her from the inside
as her steamy, heaving thighs spread wide
thrusts and screams; our ecstasy divine
she tightly wrapped her legs around mine
our naked skin more at home in this heat
our incessant bodies under the bloodied sheet.
ends as a fiery longing as when our bodies join
erogenous and ethereal, her scent fills the room
once more, I can't move through shapes that loom
spiraling darkness in shifting red dusts
she descends to the pull of my sinful lust
kissing her neck, stroking her thighs
I longed for this thrilling, insatiable high
a seductive smile affixed with innocence
desecrated by my overpowering decadence
Suddenly, we're closer, with intentions clear
"I want to do terrible things to you, my dear"
I licked her lips as sweet as wine
she teased, "can your fingers move like mine?"
her touch so electric, so ardent around me
I pinned her on the spread forcibly
I penetrate two fingers deep inside
she crosses her legs in an attempt to hide
her hot...craving...flooding below
I descend for a taste I am yet to know
smoothly, I slid in my wanton tongue
I got too hot...had to come undone
the taste between her wet, tight flesh lingers
breathless was her devilish moan of pain & pleasure
begging, she pressed her clit against my face
to violate her harder in a thousand ways
roughly devouring her from the inside
as her steamy, heaving thighs spread wide
thrusts and screams; our ecstasy divine
she tightly wrapped her legs around mine
our naked skin more at home in this heat
our incessant bodies under the bloodied sheet.
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this made me horny
28th Mar 2011 3:34pm
re: this made me horny
28th Mar 2011 6:25pm
Woe
28th Mar 2011 6:10pm
re: Woe
28th Mar 2011 6:24pm
wow
28th Mar 2011 7:50pm
:) :)
28th Mar 2011 10:20pm
WWWWOOOOOOWWWW that is amazing..i would follow you but i havee no clue how lolz...but i love this :)
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re: :) :)
29th Mar 2011 11:16am
so sexy!
29th Mar 2011 8:24pm
no problem! i had to share this on my facebook wall! it is damn hot! it received like 40+ likes, just so you know. keep it up!
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re: so sexy!
30th Mar 2011 6:25pm
Cool.! If I ever post this on my facebook all I'd get are violent reactions and pokes.
re: deep
31st Mar 2011 12:51pm
You
30th Mar 2011 5:33am
Are a fantastic writer. If this poem was a person I'd marry it, nicely done.
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O_O
4th Apr 2011 4:42pm
re: O_O
5th Apr 2011 9:08pm
Wow
7th Apr 2011 3:28am
Your vocabulary really brought out the imagery and feeling in the poem. As they say where i live this is some tough shit :D
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re: Wow
7th Apr 2011 2:55pm
This is my first attempt at erotic poems and I surely wish I've done better. Thank You for your kind words. And the follow.! :D
Deep
28th Aug 2011 4:58pm
re: Deep
28th Aug 2011 6:41pm