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Domine Dominii (Lord of Dominion)
O potens dæmonium,
Is the phrase she hears,
It reverberates in the dark cave,
Creating a ringing in her ears,
Completely clad in black,
Their faces obscured,
She shivers naked on an altar,
O potens carnificem,
One Figure chants as others follow,
Making the space seem small,
Making it seem hollow,
Her breaths jar in and out,
As the words cling to the air,
Like blood clinging to a knife,
Sanguis purus,
Her arms are grasped,
Pulled back,
Her neck arched in pain,
Hands touched and brushed,
Her breasts and thighs,
And the smell of sulfur she couldn’t deny,
Surgere dominum,
She cried in pain,
As warm blood trickled,
Out of a vain,
The chanters chanted,
And she felt the rush,
As something entered her,
Making her blush,
O Domine tolle eam,
They screamed,
As something mounted her,
And ripped her seam,
She screamed and she begged,
Until something gagged her,
That something was someone,
It was the monster on top of her,
Educ de semine,
The all but sang,
As the monster shuddered,
And licked her face,
She continued to cry through his tight grasp,
Until he growled,
And filled her not making her last,
And when he was finished,
And ripped his hand away,
Et in nomine eius,
She was burned,
And left to decay…
Is the phrase she hears,
It reverberates in the dark cave,
Creating a ringing in her ears,
Completely clad in black,
Their faces obscured,
She shivers naked on an altar,
O potens carnificem,
One Figure chants as others follow,
Making the space seem small,
Making it seem hollow,
Her breaths jar in and out,
As the words cling to the air,
Like blood clinging to a knife,
Sanguis purus,
Her arms are grasped,
Pulled back,
Her neck arched in pain,
Hands touched and brushed,
Her breasts and thighs,
And the smell of sulfur she couldn’t deny,
Surgere dominum,
She cried in pain,
As warm blood trickled,
Out of a vain,
The chanters chanted,
And she felt the rush,
As something entered her,
Making her blush,
O Domine tolle eam,
They screamed,
As something mounted her,
And ripped her seam,
She screamed and she begged,
Until something gagged her,
That something was someone,
It was the monster on top of her,
Educ de semine,
The all but sang,
As the monster shuddered,
And licked her face,
She continued to cry through his tight grasp,
Until he growled,
And filled her not making her last,
And when he was finished,
And ripped his hand away,
Et in nomine eius,
She was burned,
And left to decay…
Published 15th Jun 2014
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3rd Apr 2015 8:17pm
This is intense, an erotic horror story in poem form. Kind of reminds me of the rape scene in "Rosemary's Baby." Unforgettable. I like your use of Latin words chanted as a form of punctuation as well as incantation. Great job!
2nd Jun 2015 6:48pm
Beautifully written; painful and sensual, all keeping to the center of the theme. The Latin is wonderful. Great artistry. You're a talented writer.
25th Jan 2018 00:26am
This is really mesmerizing and well written! You placed the latin words in perfectly to make it like a spell or incantation.s
25th Jan 2018 00:32am
