serenity in our souls

Sweet and sensual Tommie! I loved it!

Thank you ifsheonlyknew :)

"until we tumbled to
calmness
filled with serenity in our souls"  <<sigh>>
lovely ink...thank you for sharing ...with respect..domore

I appreciate your words domore2014 thank you :)

Touching (so to speak) contrast between the gentle insertion and the fierce emission in the first two verses, calming down in verse four.

Thanks SS :)

I adore this Tommie! I am all about the deep bond, spirituality and serenity of the sensual experience...you gave me tingles sweet poet :) This passage is the tingliest:

"you placed yourself
gently
in between my lips "

Bravisima!

Always treasure your thoughts GW...you're too kind my friend. Thank you so much. :)

The calmness after two people share something special. Lovely. Enjoyed.

Thank you xmar82 :)

your poem's an artistic wonder, Tommie. the sexual storm followed by euphoric peace...

So glad you see it John. Much appreciated :)

A good nut will put you to sleep.

Thanks for reading CasketSharpe. :)