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"Haunting Stars"
blanket in a field, sharing wine, sitting under a tree, summer shower reveals
listening with her eyes, she talks back with a cry, wrapped in cues, aphrodisiac calls sublime
brooding, lingering lips swell lush wet
impressions indelibly left
with a touch from spindling finger-tips, she brushes his skin with her breath
glimpses of her moist tongue.. hungers him for hers'.. that won't subside
gushing sigh, gesture flirt with her muse, preview of her quest without denial
seductress entices with kneaded rivalry
promises in her silent serenade sings her sight to swoon
delicate hands float her promenade, fluttering wings dance in her moons
change that brings
dilated pupils in surprise, subtle blinks shy
sated blue irises subdue and incite a wish
flash to blink and hypnotize, trouble beguiles why nubile nuances subscribe
she shows her palm to preen, the wink he'll recognize, crush of rose, blush begins their sensual dream
emerging hues of flushing pink.. stirring him slow
revealing her passion's implicitly, behaving strange, stealing shades of shimmering jewels
soliciting excitement, persuasive pools.. inviting
daunting daze, sensorial plays her repertoire
her gaze stirs him within, shining gift.. her haunting stars..
blind his being, his heart reverberates.. listening in awe
time stops, slows.. their rhythm hums.. in pulsating throes
listening with her eyes, she talks back with a cry, wrapped in cues, aphrodisiac calls sublime
brooding, lingering lips swell lush wet
impressions indelibly left
with a touch from spindling finger-tips, she brushes his skin with her breath
glimpses of her moist tongue.. hungers him for hers'.. that won't subside
gushing sigh, gesture flirt with her muse, preview of her quest without denial
seductress entices with kneaded rivalry
promises in her silent serenade sings her sight to swoon
delicate hands float her promenade, fluttering wings dance in her moons
change that brings
dilated pupils in surprise, subtle blinks shy
sated blue irises subdue and incite a wish
flash to blink and hypnotize, trouble beguiles why nubile nuances subscribe
she shows her palm to preen, the wink he'll recognize, crush of rose, blush begins their sensual dream
emerging hues of flushing pink.. stirring him slow
revealing her passion's implicitly, behaving strange, stealing shades of shimmering jewels
soliciting excitement, persuasive pools.. inviting
daunting daze, sensorial plays her repertoire
her gaze stirs him within, shining gift.. her haunting stars..
blind his being, his heart reverberates.. listening in awe
time stops, slows.. their rhythm hums.. in pulsating throes
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Re: "Haunting Stars"
12th Jun 2014 7:09pm
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12th Jun 2014 8:00pm
Thank you MH and welcome to DU! Look forward to reading your pen and feel free to drop by anytime.
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12th Jun 2014 7:34pm
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12th Jun 2014 8:09pm
Knew you'd like the title. Wasn't the space-ghost journey in cryosleep you first envisioned? Thanks for the like and the lovely.
Re: "Haunting Stars"
12th Jun 2014 8:53pm
aww mann! I just love the way your pen seduces paper. Truly beautiful to read, jake! Xo
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Re: "Haunting Stars"
13th Jun 2014 4:35am
Good to see you here Rain. Anything beautiful in your eyes darling is okay with me! So glad you enjoyed and thank you.
Re: "Haunting Stars"
13th Jun 2014 3:10pm
Hypnotized by every word. I was sucked in, captured and happy to be in a far away place. Wonderfully written. ;)
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re: Re: "Haunting Stars"
13th Jun 2014 4:40pm
It's been a little bit since you've peeked in Tommie Lynn. Happy to see you and know you enjoyed the write. Wait, are you still hypnotized? Jake says, " Always visit with a smile and like my poems!"
Re: "Haunting Stars"
16th Aug 2014 7:35pm
beautiful poem, graceful, artistic lexicon. love that's a little shy, a little bold...
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Re: "Haunting Stars"
19th Aug 2014 1:52pm
Thanks for the compliments John and stopping by.. always a pleasure to see you here.
Re: "Haunting Stars"
3rd Sep 2014 4:22pm
I seldomly find artist who can write down such beautiful poem that melts my heart. You did it with less effort. Wonderful work.
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4th Sep 2014 2:44am
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 2:54am
Beautiful words! Like is one a lot. :)

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re: Re: "Haunting Stars"
4th Sep 2014 2:18pm
Thank you .. I will have to start addressing you as beautiful bluemoon with your appreciated use of the adjective dear!
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11th Nov 2014 6:36pm
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Anonymous
17th Nov 2014 2:38am
Awe-inspiring

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17th Nov 2014 2:42am