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The girl Whom I Care
No longer cares
No longer needs
No longer wants
My love
I gave her my everything
She left me with nothing
My heart dead
My spirit broken
My soul burned
I have nothing left to live for
So I move on
To swing upon the Gallows
And never be seen again
No longer cares
No longer needs
No longer wants
My love
I gave her my everything
She left me with nothing
My heart dead
My spirit broken
My soul burned
I have nothing left to live for
So I move on
To swing upon the Gallows
And never be seen again
Published 26th Mar 2011
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26th Mar 2011 1:10pm
26th Mar 2011 2:00pm
26th Mar 2011 2:01pm
It is an entirely true poem...my best friend had this to him...I just wrote what I thought his feelings would have been...He hung himself...
26th Mar 2011 5:42pm
that is depressing... im sorry u had to experience that... this poem seems just like what my friend is going tru to.
30th Nov 2011 3:53am
You are brilliant. As long as you continue to write, your fans will continue to read your work.
Don't ever block out your feelings; experience them and write them out in poetry so everyone can enjoy them. Great job!
Don't ever block out your feelings; experience them and write them out in poetry so everyone can enjoy them. Great job!
