(sighs) oh, i just meant to make something supposedly beautiful and pleasant (such as the beginning of june in the northern hemisphere)seem depressing, with the longer, slower sounds of "une" and "ose" put together like that. it was just a play on syllables, thus my somewhat uncreative title...
but, your comment has far more magic than mine, as your poetry probably does, as well.
your poetry is unlike so much else here, and i've always admired it, and anyway all good writing contains an element of magic, and you write good...(deliberate bad grammar there, for the sake of makng a point..:)