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Cupid's Ideal Shot
I could say I want to be your Casanova
but that conveys only one dimensional use
and though being better then nothing at all
might Cupid be so kind as to touch something more?
The sincerity that makes avenues of shared existence
both a possibility and a probability
rewards found in the expanding knowledge
of each other erogenous zones
but that conveys only one dimensional use
and though being better then nothing at all
might Cupid be so kind as to touch something more?
The sincerity that makes avenues of shared existence
both a possibility and a probability
rewards found in the expanding knowledge
of each other erogenous zones
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Re: Cupid's Ideal Shot
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2014 8:12pm
Wow, Jazzman, not exactly in the same vernacular as with all your other poems. . .this one feels intense, like a yearning (and, no, not exactly "your" yearning) but a yearning to be accepted and appreciated, desired and loved. Very touching. Excellent job:)

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re: Re: Cupid's Ideal Shot
3rd Jun 2014 8:47pm
your comment I find fascinating! Knowing that it doesn't fit the same vernacular was my intent!
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3rd Jun 2014 8:47pm
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3rd Jun 2014 8:55pm
That's a hot shot, JAZZ! Love your wording that manages to merge the love and the erotic aspects in your poem. So good!
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4th Jun 2014 10:32pm
This poem is shorter than some of hour other poems, but the message it conveys is very sweet and touching!!!
I am very moved by it and it made me happy to read this little gem of a poem!!!
I am very moved by it and it made me happy to read this little gem of a poem!!!
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re: Re: Cupid's Ideal Shot
16th Jun 2014 6:41am
thanks; I kind of a inferiority complex about short poems. I have programmed my brain to think that in being short I have neglected something. Just have let the reader go places with what is given...