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Already Dead
I'm sitting and crying on my bed
Waiting until i'm dead
Then I figured that I was already dying
because a strong man dies when he starts crying
Waiting until i'm dead
Then I figured that I was already dying
because a strong man dies when he starts crying
Published 31st May 2014
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Anonymous
31st May 2014 8:06pm
Short and potent; nice flow.
31st May 2014 8:28pm
24th Jun 2014 7:33am
Wow, that is brilliant. Could see that as a very famous quote kind of reminds me of Robert Frost who is my favourite poet and I am getting a quote of his tattooed.
Very short but fantastic.
Very short but fantastic.
3rd Jul 2014 7:00am
This poem is powerful, truly, yet it is unutterably sad to me as well. I find the concept of a strong man equating his tears with the beginning of death such a horrific concept. Perhaps, a truly strong man can cry without it diminishing him; rather, accepting tears as just another of the myriad expressions of emotions the healthy human animal/creature/person has. Just a thought to ponder, luv... There is extraordinary power in this poem, though. It reverberates through the soul.
3rd Jul 2014 10:43pm
14th Jul 2014 3:58am
