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MDMA
new years
powder
literally tastes
like the chemicals under the sink
i imagine
i think.
he's sweating
he's sweating
i'm watching
they're fucking
i'm still just watching.
went into the bathroom
all the wishes
i once had
shaved away
like my head
little strands and pieces
laying so inconspicuously
at my feet.
why is she crying
when she is talking to me
of her child
whom she should be
simply with
get offended by it
but only bad parents
partake in drugs like this
when there is a child at home
and you already have a bottle
of prescribed anti anxiety medication
just so you can what
breath?
is this really it
all my friend's friends
in a room
saying these words
that amount up
to nothing.
when all this 60 dollar drug did
was make me want to sleep.
powder
literally tastes
like the chemicals under the sink
i imagine
i think.
he's sweating
he's sweating
i'm watching
they're fucking
i'm still just watching.
went into the bathroom
all the wishes
i once had
shaved away
like my head
little strands and pieces
laying so inconspicuously
at my feet.
why is she crying
when she is talking to me
of her child
whom she should be
simply with
get offended by it
but only bad parents
partake in drugs like this
when there is a child at home
and you already have a bottle
of prescribed anti anxiety medication
just so you can what
breath?
is this really it
all my friend's friends
in a room
saying these words
that amount up
to nothing.
when all this 60 dollar drug did
was make me want to sleep.
Published 30th May 2014
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30th May 2014 4:50pm
So vivid, honest and insightful, Lacey, with a great ending. I wish I could buy stock in your future cause you rock and the sky's the limit with your talent.
Anonymous
31st May 2014 8:31am
went into the bathroom
all the wishes
i once had
shaved away
like my head
little strands and pieces
laying so inconspicuously
at my feet.
My favorite part in a very realistic piece!
all the wishes
i once had
shaved away
like my head
little strands and pieces
laying so inconspicuously
at my feet.
My favorite part in a very realistic piece!
1st Jun 2014 3:12pm
Great stream of thought, I agree with Le Fay, the beast part is the very realistic.
6th Jun 2014 9:37pm
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25th Nov 2015 3:17pm
It really made me put myself in all situations i have been in, when i was in that state of mind. Swifting through all the thoughts that bombarded me that didn't seem to make sense right then and there, whether they were complete thoughts, or just didn't know why they were there in my head in the first place. Sharing those explanations, with extensive explanation from a perspective that rarely gets viewed from regarding those experiences really gave me the connection to connect the dots myself. Simply beautiful though, created something that simulates a situation that people can not only get engulfed in, but also put them in a similar situation they have been apart of themselves.
