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shadows delight
I will absorb your pain through the folds that cry
tearing upon my strength that forgives
no matter how deep the secrets that I penetrate
when I see your hands embracing the bindings you once struggled against
I will know that you have finally found yourself deep within the shadows
The shadows you feared as evil
evil does not feel like this my pet
It is you exposed
unveiling the scarred face that you protect
the trenches from tears of running under a mask
I am just a dominant
you are but a slave
within the bindings of my hardened hands
you will hold hands with your shadows and escape
escape the burdens you carry
smiling as you run your fingers across your scarred face
discovering the treasures they bring
scars that mark the beauty
the thorns that once buckled your knees at every step you take
will be tingles of golden pricks
step swiftly my child
step into the heavenly light
of shadows delight
tearing upon my strength that forgives
no matter how deep the secrets that I penetrate
when I see your hands embracing the bindings you once struggled against
I will know that you have finally found yourself deep within the shadows
The shadows you feared as evil
evil does not feel like this my pet
It is you exposed
unveiling the scarred face that you protect
the trenches from tears of running under a mask
I am just a dominant
you are but a slave
within the bindings of my hardened hands
you will hold hands with your shadows and escape
escape the burdens you carry
smiling as you run your fingers across your scarred face
discovering the treasures they bring
scars that mark the beauty
the thorns that once buckled your knees at every step you take
will be tingles of golden pricks
step swiftly my child
step into the heavenly light
of shadows delight
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Re: shadows delight
29th May 2014 5:34pm
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29th May 2014 5:40pm
Awakened.. enjoyed the flow of this.. an alltogether different sort of appeal within this ink for me compared to some of your other writings..none the less--this is superb poetry in my humble opinion...standing O sir.. with my deepest respect..xoxo domore
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30th May 2014 12:59pm
This one came to me with more focus on rhythm than rhyme for sure, thank you for your high praises sweet Domore.
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29th May 2014 8:33pm
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30th May 2014 1:01pm
Thank you sir, you have selected the area in which I enjoy the most about my poem. Always a pleasure when you visit.
Re: shadows delight
29th May 2014 10:25pm
...another beautiful penned piece, G! I delight in your Shadows delight, inked delightful...Xo
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Thank you kind Rain.......you sure are making us wait a long time for your next piece......just sayin
Re: shadows delight
29th May 2014 11:11pm
AwakenedSoul wow this is absolutely beautiful my friend. I love wht u have composed. Entrenched by this darkness u paint
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30th May 2014 1:05pm
Black Soul, it brings me great pleasure hearing that from you, you are the master at this and you inspire. Thank you always for visiting
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Anonymous
30th May 2014 4:27am
Sweet Soul......secrets in the shadows. What a sexy thought. Enjoyed this HOT write! Xo :)
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30th May 2014 1:06pm
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30th May 2014 3:17pm
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30th May 2014 4:16pm
It does read much like a soft sigh...I couldn't quite put my finger on it before. Thank you Katja
Re: shadows delight
30th May 2014 4:31pm
<swallows hard> those shadows are a sweet delight through the sensations of your seductive words. Very luscious write!
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2nd Jun 2014 6:36pm
Thank you Blue Angel, your words always find there way across my.......pages with delight.
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3rd Jun 2014 2:48am
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4th Jun 2014 3:50am
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4th Jun 2014 1:00pm
May the shadows reveal themselves to you someday my dear sweet angel
Thank you for commenting and reading, truly appreciated
Thank you for commenting and reading, truly appreciated