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... is there?
Maybe I said …
You didn’t correct me
Maybe there’s hope
You didn’t correct me
Maybe there’s hope
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 28th May 2014
| Edited 3rd Jun 2014
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Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 9:13am
re: Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 7:30pm
'Maybes' provide us with possibilities,
new ones and old ones,
with hope, but also with
disappointment and pain.
Maybes may open up a future
and may also close a past.
new ones and old ones,
with hope, but also with
disappointment and pain.
Maybes may open up a future
and may also close a past.
Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 11:35am
re: Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 7:42pm
After all, hope without a reason for hope
might turn out a poisonous companion in life ...
Appreciate your comment, Speak,
it's a great elixir for my writing :-).
might turn out a poisonous companion in life ...
Appreciate your comment, Speak,
it's a great elixir for my writing :-).
Re: Is there?
Anonymous
28th May 2014 4:38pm
Almost like when you do that thing with the flower, he loves me, he loves me not.....
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re: Re: Is there?
Plucking petals... yes.
Plucking petals, hoping
for the 'he loves me' petal.
Mostly it's missing.
Thanks for offering so nice ideas, Fay!
Plucking petals, hoping
for the 'he loves me' petal.
Mostly it's missing.
Thanks for offering so nice ideas, Fay!
re: Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 10:05pm
Re: Is there?
Anonymous
28th May 2014 6:57pm
Miss Chi,
I'm thinking, maybe, I like this..... ; }
tornado
I'm thinking, maybe, I like this..... ; }
tornado
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re: Re: Is there?
28th May 2014 7:50pm
Leaves us with the possiblility that you don't! You're teasing me ...
Like that, tornado :-)
Like that, tornado :-)
Re: ... is there?
28th May 2014 8:24pm
For some reason i think of plucking petals off of a daisy...(she loves me,she loves me not) :)
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re: Re: ... is there?
28th May 2014 9:16pm
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28th May 2014 10:09pm
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28th May 2014 10:37pm
Miss Chi,you said let's pluck so i was plucking the first pedal lol...always with a smile :)
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28th May 2014 11:52pm
Re: ... is there?
29th May 2014 5:57am
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30th May 2014 11:31am
Re: ... is there?
29th May 2014 6:16am
Echo Paul S. Leaves one to imagine the situations it might have been said in.
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re: Re: ... is there?
That is - maybe - the crucial point, being left with the option for your own ideas. Thanks, Solomon!
Re: ... is there?
Anonymous
29th May 2014 8:30pm
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re: Re: ... is there?
30th May 2014 11:42am
Re: ... is there?
30th May 2014 7:20pm
re: Re: ... is there?
31st May 2014 12:58pm
Thanks a lot, Sarah! Hope often indicates an open outcome of something we expect or like or ... hope for. So, maybe ... xo