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Feel me
Lava lamp thoughts circle again and again
filled with whispers of my carnal wishes
heat rising to a the wanting edges
of skin neglected unfolding confession
unmarked skin reveals pain within
surging and pulsing for darkness to claim
revealing herself to the shadows of the night
pleading oh Master I give you my plight
falling hard to her knees that bleed
my rough hands reach to her lowered head
lifting her swollen empty eyes to my gaze
as the tears drip from her chin
i kneel and kiss the bloody salt of heart that is dead
the teasing nectar
my eyes narrow
as I grin
Scooping her from the trenches of pity
My shoulder now harnesses her pain
I carry her into the night
a night filled with shadows that dance
dance with lost souls
her lost soul
into my night
She will swing from my weeping willow
tangled in my loving embrace
I will catch every tear that falls
and baste her in her own misery
she is naked and shivering
in her tear coated skin
soft and salty
I release the anger built deep inside her
expelling them from her screams
screams from my whipping love
love that is strong
with eyes that truly see
see the scars
marks of beauty
opening hidden wounds stitched in betrayal
bleeding out the hatred cloud
the cloud that pours agony
blocking the light
light of an angel
angel trapped
in misery
When I unstring her from my shadowed laces
and unfold her new black wings
created by the loving words of her master
each feather a scar
magnificent scar
exposing her beauty
the blackness she keeps
so fly my sweet angel
come back when you need me
you will always be an angel
a goddess to me
let me free you
when your feeling me
filled with whispers of my carnal wishes
heat rising to a the wanting edges
of skin neglected unfolding confession
unmarked skin reveals pain within
surging and pulsing for darkness to claim
revealing herself to the shadows of the night
pleading oh Master I give you my plight
falling hard to her knees that bleed
my rough hands reach to her lowered head
lifting her swollen empty eyes to my gaze
as the tears drip from her chin
i kneel and kiss the bloody salt of heart that is dead
the teasing nectar
my eyes narrow
as I grin
Scooping her from the trenches of pity
My shoulder now harnesses her pain
I carry her into the night
a night filled with shadows that dance
dance with lost souls
her lost soul
into my night
She will swing from my weeping willow
tangled in my loving embrace
I will catch every tear that falls
and baste her in her own misery
she is naked and shivering
in her tear coated skin
soft and salty
I release the anger built deep inside her
expelling them from her screams
screams from my whipping love
love that is strong
with eyes that truly see
see the scars
marks of beauty
opening hidden wounds stitched in betrayal
bleeding out the hatred cloud
the cloud that pours agony
blocking the light
light of an angel
angel trapped
in misery
When I unstring her from my shadowed laces
and unfold her new black wings
created by the loving words of her master
each feather a scar
magnificent scar
exposing her beauty
the blackness she keeps
so fly my sweet angel
come back when you need me
you will always be an angel
a goddess to me
let me free you
when your feeling me
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Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 4:24pm
good lord, i think i need a stiff... drink after that.
i'd have to copy and paste the entire piece to pick which parts i enjoyed most... this is savage and sensual, lustful and loving melding together seamlessly.
much enjoyed, Sir
i'd have to copy and paste the entire piece to pick which parts i enjoyed most... this is savage and sensual, lustful and loving melding together seamlessly.
much enjoyed, Sir
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re: Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 4:45pm
Well young lady, go get yourself a big stiff......drink
You have captured the very essence of this write as I am now basking in your loving aroma of your comment.
Thank you
You have captured the very essence of this write as I am now basking in your loving aroma of your comment.
Thank you
Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 4:42pm
feeling you, indeed. weaved with such masterful elegance. a return is certainly foreseen. AwakenedSoul thy pen is quilled in sterling magic. :)
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re: Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 4:52pm
Let thy stains of blue brand me the marks of my existence.
The magic truly lies in the beholder of the gracious comment. Thank You Blue Angel
The magic truly lies in the beholder of the gracious comment. Thank You Blue Angel
Re: Feel me
Anonymous
27th May 2014 4:43pm
Sweet Soul.....stunning write! Powerfully poured out of your heart and soul. Can't help but feel you. I'm sure she will and won't fly too far.....if at all. Mercy!!! RL for me. Xo :)
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re: Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 4:57pm
Sweet flower, she must fly for she has not lived yet. Fear of being alone cultivates commitment. To observe life for the moment....be in Love with the moment. If she understands she is loved no matter what (her master)she can feel without fear. Reaching depth of herself unknown.
Thank you for your loving comment and always making me a part of your cherished collection.
Thank you for your loving comment and always making me a part of your cherished collection.
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Anonymous
27th May 2014 10:47pm
Sweet Soul......Even your comments back leave me speechless. Blessing to a wondering soul you are. Thank you! Xo :)
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27th May 2014 6:31pm
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27th May 2014 8:14pm
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27th May 2014 9:25pm
Welcome to DUI and my page, thank for stopping in and reading (and commenting). You will find many great poets to read.
Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 9:20pm
...what is there not to love about this amazingly written piece?! :)
Words fail me, G! Absolutely love this...Xo
Words fail me, G! Absolutely love this...Xo
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re: Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 9:28pm
Miss Rain....for it is kind words of such that lift this ink to levels imaginable, thank you always for your support.
Re: Feel me
27th May 2014 11:12pm
Awakened... absolutely love this write.. heartfelt and filled with imagery that leaves the reader shaken..in the best of ways.. all is a delight to the senses..but these lines move me most..
"so fly my sweet angel
come back when you need me
you will always be an angel
a goddess to me
let me free you
when your feeling me " beautifully done as always.. with deepest respect.. domore
"so fly my sweet angel
come back when you need me
you will always be an angel
a goddess to me
let me free you
when your feeling me " beautifully done as always.. with deepest respect.. domore
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re: Re: Feel me
28th May 2014 12:49pm
Wrinkle my pages to the edges with your shakes....
Thank you Domore, it always brings a smile to me when I see you visit.
Thank you Domore, it always brings a smile to me when I see you visit.
Re: Feel me
28th May 2014 00:12am
This is fantastic. I am so consumed by the visions you have wrought with your words, I feel I cannot even begin to relate how much I enjoy this piece. Thank you for sharing!
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re: Re: Feel me
28th May 2014 12:51pm
Rayne, I am honored by your visit and giving comment. Thrilled it has stirred emotions within you.
Re: Feel me
28th May 2014 7:10am
I believe, that's what's being a good Master is... Very considerate... Delicate.
A gentle dedication to those of us trying to fully grok the meaning of a dom-sub exchange.
A gentle dedication to those of us trying to fully grok the meaning of a dom-sub exchange.
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re: Re: Feel me
28th May 2014 12:53pm
I couldn't agree more. Thank you for the read and comment. It is much appreciated.
Re: Feel me
29th May 2014 7:50am
I really enjoyed reading this one. My simple mind cannot express in words what emotions this touched.
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29th May 2014 12:57pm
Re: Feel me
2nd Jun 2014 5:02pm
Don't know whether i should be turned on angry sad or jealous... Awesome write...
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re: Re: Feel me
2nd Jun 2014 6:39pm
You have woven yourself deep into this write to have captured all feelings that is bedded in this write. Thank you for the hard read, it is greatly appreciated.