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Decay
Lost in the sullenness
of another
Drowned by the resentment
he or she holds
Backbiter
Gorger
Flop
Peacefulness is all but lost
Decay
my morning frost...
Arise to days
long ago spent
Walk the path
walked for years
Ignorant
Loathsome
Vainglorius
Peacefulness is all but lost
Decay
my morning frost...
of another
Drowned by the resentment
he or she holds
Backbiter
Gorger
Flop
Peacefulness is all but lost
Decay
my morning frost...
Arise to days
long ago spent
Walk the path
walked for years
Ignorant
Loathsome
Vainglorius
Peacefulness is all but lost
Decay
my morning frost...
Published 17th Oct 2009
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2009 00:43am
A gorgeous, finely realised poem, like dark chocolate wrapped in pretty sponge (sorry if that metaphor makes no sense!)
Anonymous
17th Oct 2009 11:32am
that we hide within is truly beautiful, with so few words u can suggest so much. apart from jack, jamie, judas, kylee and sop,dazed, u are one of fav writers here. I always have a special fascination for dark themes, which can bring out so well, good work!:-)
17th Oct 2009 11:36am
ahh Priya, to receive comments from you is an honor... i do so feel the same... it's touching to see an appreciation for things most who 'trash bin' :)
Anonymous
17th Oct 2009 11:42am
pls dnt say that dear, we all are here at deep underground, connected in some way,maybe we are not mainstream,or of the highway, but who wants to belong to hallowed ways.i will watch out for ur writings here.happy writing!
18th Feb 2011 3:46am
To me this speaks to the trouble with being human. The monotony, the seemingly endless toil of life
