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Splendid smile
Splendid is your smile
Not only for a little while
Your eyes are beautiful
And your hair wonderful
How not to be attracted
Even my heart is attacked
Wish to meet you again
Not under the cold rain
See you soon, nice lady
Stay like that, dear Gabi
Published 18th May 2014
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Anonymous
18th May 2014 2:35am
This so beautiful and living. Babi is a very fortunate Lady to be luved by you so much. Enjoyed! :)
18th May 2014 3:01am
Sure, this love is shared, I am also very fortunate too! Thank you for this nice comment/
Your beautiful little poem is uplifting to my soul tonight -- you two are lucky to have found each other -- may your special love flourish forever....... :) ♡♡♡
P.S. I am sure she is pleased to know that u love her physical attributes so much, if she gets to read this..... :)
P.S. I am sure she is pleased to know that u love her physical attributes so much, if she gets to read this..... :)
18th May 2014 9:39am
I love not only her physic attributes, but also her mind and her soul and her heart... So many things!
Hope she reads the poem (I am sure of that) and your pretty comment, too! Thank a lot, Scarlett!
Hope she reads the poem (I am sure of that) and your pretty comment, too! Thank a lot, Scarlett!
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18th May 2014 8:52pm
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