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if i died tomorrow..
if i died tomorrow would you love me today, would you lie and tell me everythings okay. the person reading this knows who this is for, you know me and told me i was yours. so know i send my last goodbyes and thank you for re-opening my eyes. but before this poem ends answer this question with no regrets or sorrow, what would you do if i died tomorrow....
Published 22nd Mar 2011
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22nd Mar 2011 8:40pm
22nd Mar 2011 8:43pm
Once again a lovely piece of writing, I look forward to reading more.
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22nd Mar 2011 9:45pm
I just wish it was in stanzas so it was easier to read. The continual, runon line thing is sort of a turn-off for me.
24th Mar 2011 11:09pm
This is very good I'm really liking your poems.. You must be a teen??? I was once in these shoes
24th Mar 2011 11:23pm
Yes, I'm 13 (: .. but I find the word teen angst *ewww* a very demeaning word for my poetry.. I put my heart and soul into my poetry and I don't want people to just look at it then toss it bc of my age.. I'm very happy you take my work seriously. (: thanks for following me as well (:
25th Mar 2011 4:58am
I say that because your writing reminds me of me when I was a teen.. But back then I could never put my feelings into words like you are doing.. You should be proud that you have a talent to do that!! age or not,, your good and many can relate.. n Ty u as well
6th Apr 2011 9:49pm
