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Emerging
She peers out windows of her self-imposed cell
Quietly observing, endlessly contemplating,
Appearance may reflect reserved and frail
The warrior inside fact or fiction slaying
Her skin is fragile but her spirit strong
Evil demons that prick have seen her bleed
Her smile so generous to hide what’s wrong
Out of reach, but unwilling to dismiss a need
Giving to a limit, reservations to be heart touched
For the scars she bears have made her scared
Inside she secretly wishes for so very much
The sweet release of having someone to lay herself bare
with the moon rising once again, bringing its luminous glow;
and the darkness of night whispering strength on heated skin.
Wishing to feel free in all her glory to just let herself go
Until then, she’ll remain quietly waiting…for her true self to emerge again.
Quietly observing, endlessly contemplating,
Appearance may reflect reserved and frail
The warrior inside fact or fiction slaying
Her skin is fragile but her spirit strong
Evil demons that prick have seen her bleed
Her smile so generous to hide what’s wrong
Out of reach, but unwilling to dismiss a need
Giving to a limit, reservations to be heart touched
For the scars she bears have made her scared
Inside she secretly wishes for so very much
The sweet release of having someone to lay herself bare
with the moon rising once again, bringing its luminous glow;
and the darkness of night whispering strength on heated skin.
Wishing to feel free in all her glory to just let herself go
Until then, she’ll remain quietly waiting…for her true self to emerge again.
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Re: Emerging
14th May 2014 9:28pm
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14th May 2014 9:42pm
Thank you Mister Sins.. for the read and comment. :) also.. let me say.. welcome to DU... with respect.. domore
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 00:55am
I know how this feels. Read myself in this one. Beautiful! RL for me. Luv and hugs sent your way. Xo :)
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re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 2:28am
Lovely Flower.. I am touched that this would find a home within your RL...thank you for your support :) your such a kind and giving soul..love and hugs sent right back to you dear friend..xoxo domore
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 2:52am
Masterfully penned, Ms D. Your words touch deep within, confident you shall triumph.
All the best
All the best
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re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 3:12am
thank you ever so much Mr. VP :) you bring me a smile with your comment..much appreciate you :) with love and respect..domore
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 5:09am
Your inks always leave me feeling like I've known you in another life... Deep n always profoundly thoughtful you are my sweet one...
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re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 3:12pm
:) Thank you Poet :) you are too good... I am thankful for your reading and lovely comments.. you always offer a kindness in them :) with love and respect..domore
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 6:23am
"The sweet release of having
someone to lay herself bare"
this piece is poignant, beautiful domore but those lines really jumped out at me. enjoyed xo
someone to lay herself bare"
this piece is poignant, beautiful domore but those lines really jumped out at me. enjoyed xo
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re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 3:14pm
Beautiful miss m (kat)....you've picked my fav lines of this :) thank you soo much for your time and sweet expression of enjoyment :) with love and respect...xoxo domore
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 10:48am
re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 3:16pm
Lady Peninnah... many thanks :) and cheers "to flowers blooming" :) mite we all enjoy such fragrance :) with respect..domore :)
Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 6:00pm
May you render free of haunting past
run your fingers across tassels of the night
let them capture, twist and hold you
suffocate the fears of your plight
taste the chill of sweet release
deep in your depth the darkness unhinging
opening the captured girl within
floating beyond the edges
together again
Your work is so hypnotic, the style and smoothness just invites the reader, so very well written
run your fingers across tassels of the night
let them capture, twist and hold you
suffocate the fears of your plight
taste the chill of sweet release
deep in your depth the darkness unhinging
opening the captured girl within
floating beyond the edges
together again
Your work is so hypnotic, the style and smoothness just invites the reader, so very well written
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re: Re: Emerging
15th May 2014 9:35pm
Awakened.. your words touch me deeply.... you impart such kindness.. I am honored with it's sincerity..and I am ever grateful. with deepest respect..domore
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5th Jul 2014 7:28pm
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re: Re: Emerging
6th Jul 2014 5:50pm
Jack.. you make me smile so that my eyes even twinkle with it... Thank you so much for your comment and read..I am honored by your thoughts. with much respect..domore
"The battle of life is, in most cases, fought uphill; and to win it without a struggle were perhaps to win it without honor. If there were no difficulties there would be no success; if there were nothing to struggle for, there would be nothing to be achieved."
Samuel Smiles
"The battle of life is, in most cases, fought uphill; and to win it without a struggle were perhaps to win it without honor. If there were no difficulties there would be no success; if there were nothing to struggle for, there would be nothing to be achieved."
Samuel Smiles