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My love ( Female point of view)
My Love
As I lay down naked day dreaming about the first time our tongue made love
Thinking about your strong muscular hand on my naked body
Pussy getting soak
Hoping you would kick down my doors and swim in my pussy
Remembering the time when we first made love
Feeling all your manhood
While you open my walls
Holding your head
Scratching your back
While I gasp for air
Felt so good
Kept asking for more
The way you change the pace
Felt so great
Playing with my clit
While you suck on my nipples
While you fuck me hard
The love we made that night surly won't be forgotten my love....
As I lay down naked day dreaming about the first time our tongue made love
Thinking about your strong muscular hand on my naked body
Pussy getting soak
Hoping you would kick down my doors and swim in my pussy
Remembering the time when we first made love
Feeling all your manhood
While you open my walls
Holding your head
Scratching your back
While I gasp for air
Felt so good
Kept asking for more
The way you change the pace
Felt so great
Playing with my clit
While you suck on my nipples
While you fuck me hard
The love we made that night surly won't be forgotten my love....
Published 10th May 2014
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10th May 2014 4:01pm
10th May 2014 9:01pm
10th May 2014 10:07pm
11th May 2014 5:49pm
The word "pussy" makes my fem-boner disappear. Your words are not romantic at all. And you keep changing from past-tense to present-tense and back. Could use work.
12th May 2014 2:53am
