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when toughest love is truly born
and wretched hate meets demise
secrets key to lovers dorm
lays beneath unseeing eyes
holding hands in happy hearts
icy storms begin to melt
a swimming feeling in heads do start
tender lovers souls are felt
and wretched hate meets demise
secrets key to lovers dorm
lays beneath unseeing eyes
holding hands in happy hearts
icy storms begin to melt
a swimming feeling in heads do start
tender lovers souls are felt
Published 21st Mar 2011
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21st Mar 2011 5:16pm
22nd Mar 2011 12:27pm
22nd Mar 2011 12:32pm
I actually like it, felt as if I were bobbing on a sea of romantic words.
'when toughest love is truly born
and wretched hate meets demise
secrets key to lovers dorm
lays beneath unseeing eyes
holding hands in happy hearts
icy storms begin to melt
a swimming feeling in heads do start
tender lover's souls are felt'
Really, really lovely from top to bottom.
'when toughest love is truly born
and wretched hate meets demise
secrets key to lovers dorm
lays beneath unseeing eyes
holding hands in happy hearts
icy storms begin to melt
a swimming feeling in heads do start
tender lover's souls are felt'
Really, really lovely from top to bottom.
22nd Mar 2011 12:43pm
