the relationship...

Yes, that's the hard part...

Enjoyed...

I've never really understood
the line about having to work
at a relationship, I thought it
was meant to be fun...

thanks, Fen

I never want to work that hard either.

let's just take it easy..:)

I like this poem and I don't think it's about having to work at a relationship, but it's already gone bad and now where do they go?

you mean has the relation
ship sunk..?

Ahahahahahah!!!! ^_^
I always wear my life-jacket!

A lot said in so few words. Amazing work!

thanks very much..:)

powerful ... cutting ... stark

ah, the Cutty Sark, standing in
dry dock for all time at Greenwich,
it's my favourite ship..:)

This double entendre is really your hallmark. We do have to work at a relationship during the relationship itself and all the more afterwards to reprocess it. It seems that love is a project consisting of permanent construction sites. You say so much in few words. Very special and likable.

thanks for your kind words,
Chi...mind you, I think you
make relationships sound
a bit of an effort! I'll have
to tell my wife we're
just not trying..:)

Yes, yes, no pain, no gain!

:-) NO ... DON'T!

all work and no play makes paul a dull poet...
from the looks of things, you play a lot,
i guess the relation
ship can find it's own keel...

exactly...sink or (oh shit, I
can't swim..!)