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My Little....no longer
The silhouette is expanding...
The swells and curvatures of
the landscape are
Maturing before my eyes.
I can remember the days as
small seedling...
Taking in the world around...
Now expanding presence allows for you
to now longer just take in
but also give to the world...
Even so,
Still visible is room for growth
It is my pleasure and honor to watch
you,
my son...
Make your
mark,
path,
life....
The swells and curvatures of
the landscape are
Maturing before my eyes.
I can remember the days as
small seedling...
Taking in the world around...
Now expanding presence allows for you
to now longer just take in
but also give to the world...
Even so,
Still visible is room for growth
It is my pleasure and honor to watch
you,
my son...
Make your
mark,
path,
life....
Published 8th May 2014
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8th May 2014 6:06pm
Standing Ovation!
You made me cry thinking of how much my son is growing and I see how proud you are of your son.
Aplauso mi amor!
You made me cry thinking of how much my son is growing and I see how proud you are of your son.
Aplauso mi amor!
8th May 2014 6:31pm
awww thanks....I was looking at him yesterday and just listening to him talk and these thoughts came to me....I am proud..Thanks...and enjoy each stage they are in!!!!
8th May 2014 7:34pm
....and they grow up so fast. I love this and the joy I feel from it as a mother myself. I have but one child, a son, who is a young man now.
....and Shell, no matter how old, grown and out the house, married with family, you're still mama and you'll still worry like he is 5 years old, trust me.... Love it! :)Xo
....and Shell, no matter how old, grown and out the house, married with family, you're still mama and you'll still worry like he is 5 years old, trust me.... Love it! :)Xo
8th May 2014 8:57pm
LOL....well I will take it as it comes!! :) Between the three of mine I know my knee pads will need plenty replacing from my prayers!! :) AS always much appreciated to be graced by your presence!
8th May 2014 11:39pm
An extraordinary poem n...how fast time passes with so much uncertainty.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
9th May 2014 1:37pm
That is almost the only certainity...time will pass...just a matter of hanging on and enjoying the ride!! :) THanks for the read!!! :)
9th May 2014 7:59pm
this was right on time for mother's day...i surely couldnt help but smile as i read it:)
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12th May 2014 12:59pm
Beautiful Nik!!!I hope you did have an amazing mothers day!!!
Kisses!!
Much respect!!!
Kisses!!
Much respect!!!
12th May 2014 1:50pm
It was a good day thanks! Hpoefully yours was too! and thanks for the ink love!
16th May 2014 7:44pm
Great nurturing piece Ms. Shell!!
Happy Belated Mother's Day!!
Love the read!!!
Sir Lancelott
Happy Belated Mother's Day!!
Love the read!!!
Sir Lancelott
27th May 2014 3:53pm
splendid blending of human attributes with other organisms that are also living.
27th May 2014 5:43pm
25th Jan 2016 5:59am
Wow. Something so amazing about the transformation from the receiver to the giver must give a body a shivers!
I can remember the days as
small seedling...
Taking in the world around...
Now expanding presence allows for you
to now longer just take in
but also give to the world...
I can remember the days as
small seedling...
Taking in the world around...
Now expanding presence allows for you
to now longer just take in
but also give to the world...
26th Jan 2016 1:10pm
It is definitely amazing, terrifying, and gratifying all at the same time!!!!!!!!
