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A moment with Ms Love
I saw Love leave today, with a wave as she walked away from me
She took one last glance, smiled, that was the last I would see
I don’t blame her for leaving, as Resentment was due
And between her and Hate, Love took the gap & off she flew
I stood staring watching her grow smaller & finally disappear
Reminiscing how she had taught me to laugh, live and have no fear
But I knew deep down inside that this would happen one day
She had so many lessons to share, I could not ask her to stay
The fields are all brown and barren and the air has grown cold
Alone and warmed by my memories on the porch where I grow old
Distracted by the winds of misery of Anger & Pain in yet another fight
Which leads to Resentment and Hate who take them in for the night
She took one last glance, smiled, that was the last I would see
I don’t blame her for leaving, as Resentment was due
And between her and Hate, Love took the gap & off she flew
I stood staring watching her grow smaller & finally disappear
Reminiscing how she had taught me to laugh, live and have no fear
But I knew deep down inside that this would happen one day
She had so many lessons to share, I could not ask her to stay
The fields are all brown and barren and the air has grown cold
Alone and warmed by my memories on the porch where I grow old
Distracted by the winds of misery of Anger & Pain in yet another fight
Which leads to Resentment and Hate who take them in for the night
Published 7th May 2014
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7th May 2014 8:11pm
Wow! smh....you are such a great poet.
I love this so much Feen! It's great to read ink from you, you've been missed..Xo
Pen Love!
I love this so much Feen! It's great to read ink from you, you've been missed..Xo
Pen Love!
11th May 2014 2:15pm
ahh Rain, you so inspire....life keeping me captive with all it's demands, but will be back in full force soon..thank you..curtsy bow...blush...
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8th May 2014 10:54pm
Your uses of alliteration and enjambment and visual imagery add the raw expression, well done.
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29th Jun 2014 9:46pm
those demons of emotion who are too tough for us to dominate, & the dismal feeling as we watch love walk away...
30th Jun 2014 00:28am
