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Goodbye
What am i to you , a pitiful girl who is willing to give you fucking EVERYTHING!
A rage of fury is rising inside of me , taking over , my eyes see crimson , craving the kiss of death that will free me from torture.
I scream inside , my heart crumbling to black ash , lies and betrayal have poisoned me from within and now the devil caged inside of my hell bound silhouette is breaking free .
I should say my final farewells because he is driving me insane , and the end is set to come.
A rage of fury is rising inside of me , taking over , my eyes see crimson , craving the kiss of death that will free me from torture.
I scream inside , my heart crumbling to black ash , lies and betrayal have poisoned me from within and now the devil caged inside of my hell bound silhouette is breaking free .
I should say my final farewells because he is driving me insane , and the end is set to come.
Published 5th May 2014
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5th May 2014 8:49pm
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6th May 2014 00:18am
I hope so , I'm feeling really down at the moment :< , thankyou for commenting c:
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24th May 2014 5:37pm
Thank you for commenting , it was written whilst i was angry so I'm glad it has shown that x)
29th May 2014 4:38am
Love you poems! Too many that I like to choose from. You're a great writer!
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19th Jun 2014 9:09pm
"the devil caged inside of my hell bound silhouette is breaking free."
Raw as fuck but I love it.
Awesome piece!
Raw as fuck but I love it.
Awesome piece!
20th Jun 2014 5:41pm
