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The Rose Beyond Your Wall
24/7 i was right here. Besides your shadow, at the realm of arms stretch...All you had to do was look. I kept my colors bright, sheen in my petals, fresh scent, all i thought was right for you...
24/7 something else was on your mind, someone else or some place perhaps,always was more important....
All i needed was a second of your minute, a simple glance, a stare...i waited on the line hoping perhaps one day will be mine...
All i needed was for you to see me.But not until he saw me,that i crossed your mind.
xoxo
The Rose Beyond Your Wall.
(Inspired by another poet's piece)
24/7 something else was on your mind, someone else or some place perhaps,always was more important....
All i needed was a second of your minute, a simple glance, a stare...i waited on the line hoping perhaps one day will be mine...
All i needed was for you to see me.But not until he saw me,that i crossed your mind.
xoxo
The Rose Beyond Your Wall.
(Inspired by another poet's piece)
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Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
3rd May 2014 12:16pm
Hi Pesh I will love to write something on this piece but am in an exam.I will be back
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Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
3rd May 2014 1:28pm
Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
3rd May 2014 6:35pm
The Rose Scenting My Heart
I have to admit
24/7 I never cared
A loving heart
I turned a blind eye
Forever I will remember
24/7 I suffered silently.
I saw it in your eyes
A heart dying to be loved.
Will I give it a second. No
Will I give it a minute. No
Will I give it an hour. No
Will I give it a day.No
But forever my love
Will keep you strong physically.
I will admire, like you
I will feel, miss you
I will love, touch you
I will caress, hold you
And
I will kiss your tender lips
To bring that smile back.
plz do not let him see you.
coz I need my rose back.
I have to admit
24/7 I never cared
A loving heart
I turned a blind eye
Forever I will remember
24/7 I suffered silently.
I saw it in your eyes
A heart dying to be loved.
Will I give it a second. No
Will I give it a minute. No
Will I give it an hour. No
Will I give it a day.No
But forever my love
Will keep you strong physically.
I will admire, like you
I will feel, miss you
I will love, touch you
I will caress, hold you
And
I will kiss your tender lips
To bring that smile back.
plz do not let him see you.
coz I need my rose back.
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Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
THE ROSE ON HIS WALL
24/7 baby that exactly was the text on my eyes
24/7 that was the whisper from my heart
24/7 that is the language my body spoke
24/7!but 24/7 i never once fit your schedule!
24/7 he treats me right
24/7 he baptize me with his love
24/7 he never leave me unattended
24/7 he is my black coffee and am his sugar and cream!
24/7 you were IT back then
24/7 you are the one i wanted most.
24/7 he is the IN man now
24/7 he is the one i need more!
xoxo!
The Rose On His Wall
24/7 baby that exactly was the text on my eyes
24/7 that was the whisper from my heart
24/7 that is the language my body spoke
24/7!but 24/7 i never once fit your schedule!
24/7 he treats me right
24/7 he baptize me with his love
24/7 he never leave me unattended
24/7 he is my black coffee and am his sugar and cream!
24/7 you were IT back then
24/7 you are the one i wanted most.
24/7 he is the IN man now
24/7 he is the one i need more!
xoxo!
The Rose On His Wall
Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
4th May 2014 9:04am
Damn!Am loving this!!!i love your reply!!!but you too late my brother!!!lol!!!you are an incredible gifted and talented writer!!!it is a pleasure working with you!
How was the xzam?tell me you did nail it?
How was the xzam?tell me you did nail it?
re: Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
4th May 2014 10:55am
did my part waiting for the markers and God to do there part.thanks for asking dear I rily appreciate.
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re: Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
4th May 2014 11:40am
pleasure all mine dear.we are all talented and am honoured to have met you as a poet.
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Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
4th May 2014 11:14am
Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
5th May 2014 3:37pm
Re: The Rose Beyond Your Wall
6th May 2014 7:59am
Hello Some-some!!!
Thanks,i had fun working on them and with him too!
Kissess!thanks for reading!
Thanks,i had fun working on them and with him too!
Kissess!thanks for reading!