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reminder
he thinks of debts
he can't repay
and then forgets
and drifts away
to linger where
his love will lay
regardless there
of how he'll pay...
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Re: reminder
1st May 2014 2:03am
re: Re: reminder
1st May 2014 2:39am
thanks, that's the thing,
getting the pattern right,
in sight and in sound..:) x
getting the pattern right,
in sight and in sound..:) x
Re: reminder
1st May 2014 2:58am
had
a few moments of similar disrememberance meslf
a few times
once every
now
&
then
a few moments of similar disrememberance meslf
a few times
once every
now
&
then
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re: Re: reminder
1st May 2014 11:05pm
Re: reminder
1st May 2014 4:43am
And
there will
always be those
special ones--
to whom
we shall be
always indebted....
(There is a bit of your heart,and soul in this piece, mo Chara...x)
there will
always be those
special ones--
to whom
we shall be
always indebted....
(There is a bit of your heart,and soul in this piece, mo Chara...x)
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1st May 2014 11:07pm
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1st May 2014 10:22pm
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1st May 2014 11:09pm
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2nd May 2014 1:34am
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2nd May 2014 1:44am
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4th May 2014 1:36am
either a piece about avoiding
consequences...
or an inconsequential piece..:)
consequences...
or an inconsequential piece..:)