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Naked Walls
I've not heard your breath
your breathing hasn't passed
through my ears just yet
your pain has lingered with
mine in crooked shadows
cast on naked walls
and the crying echoes in
the attic as it bounces off
the memories
black ink streams down
from bloodshot eyes
staining my ghostly face
my insides are like the
naked walls bare and
cold warped and cracked
your breathing hasn't passed
through my ears just yet
your pain has lingered with
mine in crooked shadows
cast on naked walls
and the crying echoes in
the attic as it bounces off
the memories
black ink streams down
from bloodshot eyes
staining my ghostly face
my insides are like the
naked walls bare and
cold warped and cracked
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30th Apr 2014 5:22pm
Excellent sadness depicted here, miss. Very good descriptively, but now my heart hurts.
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