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to bathe,
to bathe,
warm
relaxed
alone
the scent,
lavender
oil
topped off
with
bubbles
fresh skin,
smooth
soft to
touch
to bathe,
soaking
my filthy
thoughts
warm
relaxed
alone
the scent,
lavender
oil
topped off
with
bubbles
fresh skin,
smooth
soft to
touch
to bathe,
soaking
my filthy
thoughts
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30th Apr 2014 8:45pm
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30th Apr 2014 8:46pm
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beautiful Tommie i'm with you on this write so delicately sensual :) with love Crim
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30th Apr 2014 8:47pm
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30th Apr 2014 6:54pm
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30th Apr 2014 8:48pm
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30th Apr 2014 10:20pm
Sums up a sensuous, solo bath. The thigh in the pic adds to this sense.
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30th Apr 2014 11:46pm
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1st May 2014 00:48am
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1st May 2014 3:42am
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1st May 2014 1:50am
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1st May 2014 3:43am
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1st May 2014 6:26am
Concise, alluring, with a bit of flair, Ms Tommie Lynn.
Excellent!
Following the 'soak' a thorough head-to-toes massage is a pleasurable way to *caress* the 'filthy thoughts.' In my humble opinion. :)
Excellent!
Following the 'soak' a thorough head-to-toes massage is a pleasurable way to *caress* the 'filthy thoughts.' In my humble opinion. :)
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1st May 2014 5:24pm
Oh dear sweet baby Jesus. ...you're on the right track VegasPoet. Wonderful comment, thank you for reading me. :)
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1st May 2014 3:02pm
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1st May 2014 5:25pm
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2nd May 2014 00:16am
This is a super fun piece. I've missed Mr. Sugar Skull...a lucky bag of bones indeed. The pic is great...I like the strategic bubble placement :)
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2nd May 2014 9:01pm
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Anonymous
2nd May 2014 6:15pm
"Soaking my filthy thoughts"..classic Tommie right there! Slick poem!
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2nd May 2014 9:02pm
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Anonymous
2nd May 2014 9:02pm
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2nd May 2014 9:04pm
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8th May 2014 1:07am
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8th May 2014 00:37am
"There must be quite a few things that a hot bath won't cure but I don't know any many of them." - Sylvia Plath
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
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8th May 2014 1:09am